Phân tích"As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (ĐỀ thi ​29/10/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (ĐỀ thi ​29/10/2022)

As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: An effective corporate society responsibility program can have a positive impact on companies, employees, and consumers. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Corporate society responsibility demonstrates that businesses take an interest in wider social issues, rather than just those that impact their profit margins, which will attract customers who share the same values. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
      • Example: For example, gaining efficiencies by reducing packaging or using less energy can help companies cut costs while also benefiting the environment.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: corporate society responsibility can also create a competitive advantage in the marketplace.(IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: improve public image & increase brand awareness and recognition)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Many consumers want to support companies that have a reputation for being good corporate citizens  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: consumers are increasingly aware of the importance of social responsibility, and actively seek products from businesses that operate ethically)
        • A business that engages in socially or environmentally harmful behavior risks losing a significant number of potential customers.
      • Example: 
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý main idea khác: 
    • Main idea: It’s proven that employees enjoy working more for a company that has a good public image than one that doesn’t.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng trạng từ "quickly" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: The workplace will be a more positive and productive place to work, and by promoting things like volunteering, corporate society responsibility  encourage personal and professional growth.

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