Phân tích bài process"The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun" IELTS WRITING

Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích bài process"The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun" IELTS WRITING

The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Intro: The diagram illustrates the way in which greenhouse gases are produced and how these gases trap heat from the sun.
• Overall: Pollution itself is a complex process, with roots in the mankind actions.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "mankind" tiếng anh
• Bố cục sẽ chia thành 2 đoạn tương ứng với 2 đoạn thân bài với 2 quy trình:
  • Body 1: Quy trình 1: greenhouse gases are produced, 3 cách:
    • Cách 1: Extra carbon dioxide is evacuated from power plants or factories which burn fossil fuels:

      • The pollutants also meet with extra carbon dioxide, evacuated from power plants or factories which burn fossil fuels, forming a clutter of man-made pollutants.

    • Cách 2: The engine of a car, plane, motorised boat or other vehicles release toxic substances:
      • One of the most common way gases are released into the earth’s atmosphere is by means of transport. The engine of a car, plane, motorised boat or other vehicles release toxic substances.
    • Cách 3:  Forest are felled/are being felled/have been felled

      • The process is fastened also by the deforestation, which logs trees that could have absorbed the man-produced carbon dioxide. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng Topic Environment IELTS

  • Body 2: Quy trình 2: these gases trap heat from the sun, bắt đầu từ the sun

    • Energy from the Sun reaches the Earth as heat.

    • Some of this heat energy is subsequently/then radiated into space while some of it is trapped by greenhouse gases in the atmosphere and reflected back to Earth.

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