Phân tích "Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

  • Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
    • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
      • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
        • Main idea: Lack of privacy is one of the biggest handicaps of being a celebrity
        • Supporting idea: 
          • They are being judged constantly on their personality, habit and a lot more. 
          • Reading rude, insulting, derogatory, nasty lies about one’s own self is a part and parcel of a famous film star’s daily routine. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng Topic Daily routine IELTS 
          • This leads to the destruction of their private lives.  
        • Example: For example, ‘A-listers’ like Kanye West are hounded by Papparazzi wherever they go and can never lead a ‘normal’ life again.
      • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
        • Main idea: A famous person cannot do things that an ordinary person can easily.
        • Supporting idea: Even they cannot go for shopping to the super market, take a walk, chilling with friends at the park or having dinner with family at the local restaurant.
        • Example: 
    • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
      • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
      • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
        • Main idea 1: celebrities are fabulously wealthy
          • Supporting idea: 
            • From signing multi-million dollar deals and appearing in events and concerts to walking the red carpet while the world drools over what you wear is part of the grandiose lifestyle of a superstar.
            • They often become millionaires overnight, and this allows them to buy whatever they want for themselves and their loved ones and all for doing something they love. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: They can afford luxurious homes and cars, fancy gifts and gorgeous cloths, some feel fortunate enough to share their wealth with the less fortunate)
          • Example: Premiership footballers are a prime example; with most of them being able to support themselves for the rest of their lives, after earning over $50,000 per week, on average, for many years. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "average" tiếng anh 
        • Main idea 2: Celebrities also exert considerable influence on the society.
          • Supporting idea: 
            • Their followers listen to them and imitate them blindly. 
            • Celebrities can make a positive difference to the world by lending their support to various causes. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ "various" tiếng anh
          • Example: 
      • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
        • Main idea 1: Lack of privacy is one of the biggest handicaps of being a celebrity
          • Supporting idea: 
            • They are being judged constantly on their personality, habit and a lot more. 
            • Reading rude, insulting, derogatory, nasty lies about one’s own self is a part and parcel of a famous film star’s daily routine. 
            • This leads to the destruction of their private lives.  
          • Example: For example, ‘A-listers’ like Kanye West are hounded by Papparazzi wherever they go and can never lead a ‘normal’ life again. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "wherever" 
        • Main idea 2: A famous person cannot do things that an ordinary person can easily.
          • Supporting idea: Even they cannot go for shopping to the super market, take a walk, chilling with friends at the park or having dinner with family at the local restaurant.
          • Example: 

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