Phân tích "Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives.
      • Main idea 1: Due to the absence of obligations, they can have much fun in their lives without facing any difficulties  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: young people are free from these worries because they are often supported financially and free from any real troubles)
        • Supporting idea: 
          • They can freely unleash their creativity and play with everything that they are passionate about, and eventually can explore so many opportunities that the life can offer. 
          • Most live with their parents who pay for all their needs and the only thing they have to focus on is studying. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "focus" tiếng anh
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2:  Young people have an active social life with their friends, often simply by hanging out with them >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "life" tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea: Except going through some daily essentials such as, timely sleep, school, sports, food and friends, there is no need to care much for the rest of the stuff as parents are always there to support their unmatured children.
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
      • Main idea 1: Maturity gives adults greater confidence in their own judgement in all areas of life. 
      • Main idea 2: The joys of maturity include a content family life, long-lasting friendships and a career.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Long-term relationships may not have the fireworks of adolescence, but are stronger, because of the wealth of shared experience. 
          • At work, many of us are stimulated by the professional skills we acquire, which ensures that our jobs remain interesting. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "ensure" tiếng anh
        • Example: 
      • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý main idea khác:
        • Main idea: Long-term relationships may not have the fireworks of adolescence, but are stronger because of the wealth of shared experience
        • Supporting idea: At work, many of us are stimulated by the professional skills we acquire, which ensures that our jobs remain interesting.

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