Phân tích "It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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I. Đề bài

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

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  • Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 - AGREE
      • Main idea 1: Children learn what is appropriate via punishment and discipline. 
        • Supporting idea: When children are taught the distinction between right and wrong through punishment, they understand the repercussions and are more likely to cease doing so.
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: The fear of punishment will encourage students to stay away from wrongdoings, and hence they will not get into any problems with their friends or teachers. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "hence" tiếng anh  
        • Supporting idea: When these children grow up into adults they will always strive to do the right thing and they will stay away from the wrong path due to the lessons learned in their childhood.
        • Example: For example, a kid punished for stealing a pencil from his classmate is unlikely to do that in future because of the embarrassment he faced the last time he did it.
    • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
      • Main idea 1: It may be as simple as scolding and using minor penalties to educate children that their actions have harmful effects >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG "HARM / HARMFUL" TIẾNG ANH 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • One approach to assist youngsters in understanding the difference between right and wrong is to take away their privileges or pocket money, encourage them to help with household chores, and then educate them on why they are being punished.
          • These techniques are less likely to have an adverse effect on a child’s mental health.
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: 
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 

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