Phân tích đề"Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals"IELTS WRITING

Bên cạnh phân tích kĩ càng đề thi IELTS GENERAL TASK 2 ngày 4/8/2020, kèm bài sửa cho hs đi thi thật, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích đề"Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals"IELTS WRITING

Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Nếu theo quan điểm ủng hộ quan điểm số 2 có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm 1 
    • Main idea 1: In many zoos, animals are being mistreated as they are often provided with insufficient food and medical care  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "provide" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: This has so far caused many animals in zoos to die because of starvation and diseases.
      • Example:
    • Main idea 2: keeping wild animals in captivity might deprive them of their freedom. 
      • Supporting idea: Wild animals are caged in a limited space and fed by humans while they long for a natural way of life. Therefore, many of them might suffer from boredom and confinement  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "feed" tiếng anh
      • Example:
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm 2 (nhấn mạnh ủng hộ quan điểm này)
    • Main idea 1:  Zoos can help to preserve endangered animals 
      • Supporting idea: zoos can keep animals safe from poachers and other threats, such as habitat destruction and the spread of urbanisation.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng & ideas topic "urban/city life" IELTS
      • Supporting idea: Some zoos also run breeding programs in order to try and increase the numbers of some endangered species to avoid them becoming extinct. 
      • Example:
    • Main idea 2: By keeping animals in zoos, people can learn and understand more about them 
      • Supporting idea: This can help to raise awareness amongst the public in order to help preserve certain species.
      • Example:

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