Phân tích "Some people think the most important thing about being rich is that it gives an opportunity to help other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Some people think the most important thing about being rich is that it gives an opportunity to help other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: giving money to the poor would be a very shortsighted approach because providing education and job training is better way of helping the poor.
      • Supporting idea:
        • Many volunteers who teach children of the slum area every evening are not very rich themselves, but their commitment to community is helpful in better ways than money can do.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: the rich have their rights to prioritize their own self-interests above the interests of other people. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "interest" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Thanks to their hard work and smart moves, they’ve acquired a huge amount of wealth.
        • Therefore, it is easy to understand why they are uncomfortable with the idea of giving up their hard earned money. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng THEREFORE & HENCE tiếng anh
      • Example: 

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Being rich can provide individuals with the means to help others in various ways. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • They can donate to charities and philanthropic organizations, support their family and friends financially, and invest in projects that benefit society.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"donate"tiếng anh
        • By donating money, time, or resources, rich individuals can help address pressing social issues and improve the lives of others.
      • Example: 
        • For example, the Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation has donated billions of dollars to support global health initiatives and other causes.
        • For example, the Chan Zuckerberg Initiative, founded by Facebook CEO Mark Zuckerberg and his wife Priscilla Chan, has invested in a range of social projects, including education, healthcare, and criminal justice reform.
        • For instance, the Oprah Winfrey Foundation supports a range of initiatives, including education, healthcare, and the arts.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Being rich can enable individuals to create jobs and support the economy by starting businesses, investing in startups, and providing financial support to small businesses and entrepreneurs.
      • Supporting idea: This, in turn, can benefit communities and entire regions by providing opportunities for workers and boosting local economies.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng BENEFIT (động từ, danh từ) & BENEFICIAL
      • Example: 
        • For example, Amazon founder Jeff Bezos started his company with a relatively small investment and eventually built it into one of the world's largest employers, with over 800,000 employees worldwide.
        • For instance, billionaire investor Peter Thiel has been a major backer of several successful tech startups, including Facebook and Palantir, which have created thousands of jobs.
        • For example, the billionaire founder of Spanx, Sara Blakely, has donated millions of dollars to support female entrepreneurs through her Sara Blakely Foundation.
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý main idea khác: Being rich can also provide individuals with the means to create educational opportunities for others, such as funding scholarships, supporting schools and universities, and providing mentorship and training programs.

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