Phân tích essay "In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Cambridge 16 Test 1 Writing Task 2)

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Bên cạnh phân tích đề thi thật task 1 viết thư của IELTS GENERAL được sửa rất kĩ bởi giáo viên cho bạn học sinh đã đi thi ngày đó và đạt 6.0 nhé, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích bài essay In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question? IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

II. Từ vựng

III. Phân tích

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  • Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 What are the reasons for this? 
      • Main idea 1: knowing more about the condition and prior events of their house might guarantee the owner’s safety since people could evaluate the condition of their living space and make plans for future maintenance  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: they want to understand the structure)
        • Supporting idea: People might be interested in knowing the materials their building is made of to know whether it can withstand future modifications, or if it is in need of repairs and maintenance.
        • Example:  For example, a broken pipe that has been mended recently means that breakage will not occur in the near future although caution is advisable. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "Occur" tiếng anh
      • Main idea 2: Another reason among all contributing factors might be superstition, especially in East Asia, and this stereotype has rooted in their culture.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • The older generations tend to believe that the previous owner of the house they will live in will exert some influence on the fortune of their own. 
          • That is, if the prior owner was a successful person, they are likely to succeed; on the contrary, if they died accidentally, their bad fortune is believed to pass on to the next accommodators  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: For some people, researching the history of the building could be an attempt to avoid staying in a haunted place or something like that. If the building has a haunted past, people can choose not to live in them)
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 How can people research this question?
      • Main idea 1: talking to the former dweller or neighbors could unveil a myriad of secrets about their house (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The simplest method is that people can ask local citizens for information, especially the elders) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "Citizen" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: As they are considered as the most trusted sources, this could give insights on incidents that might help the current landlord prepare for the upcoming troubles (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Because they are the people who lived in that neighbourhood for a long time, they will be a worthwhile source of information if anyone wants to understand more about their houses or their living areas) >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt "worth, worthy & worthwhile" 
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: in the globalization era, the internet is a prominent tool for people living anywhere in the world. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "prominent" tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • With just a click of a button or tap of the screen, people could easily learn about the construction stage or major occurrences in the past. 
          • If any defections come across, this could affect their moving decision. 
        • Example: To illustrate, many buildings in some areas of Vietnam have a huge source of documents and online information associated with them and it is extremely useful if some people want to understand about the places that they are going to move in.

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