Phân tích"In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other poeple think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an egeing population outweigh the disadavantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other poeple think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an egeing population outweigh the disadavantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other poeple think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an egeing population outweigh the disadavantages?

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  • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
  • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages
    • Main idea 1: seniors possess abundant experience and as such they can offer valuable advice to young people  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "advise" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Seniors have lived through various life experiences, including successes and failures, and have gained wisdom from these experiences that can guide and inspire younger generations.
      • Example: Ruth Bader Ginsburg, a brilliant U.S. Supreme Court Justice from 1993 until her passing in 2020, was a passionate advocate for gender equality and a role model who offered valuable advice to young people on achieving their goals
    • Main idea 2: an increase in the number of old people means a greater pool of volunteers for community and government projects.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "advice" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: here are groups of elderly people established to provide free education for poverty-hit children or to clean the environment.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CÁCH PARAPHRASE TỪ "ADVISE" TIẾNG ANH
      • Example: For example, we often see old people in developed countries engage in charity work to provide shelter and food for the homeless in their neighborhoods. 
  • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages
    • Main idea 1:  lack of young labor workforce would cause stagnation for the growth of individual businesses and the global economy as a whole  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "cause" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: This is because little innovation may take place in this circumstance.
      • Example: many first world countries whose proportion of senior citizens is higher than that of young people, such as Japan, are already experiencing these undesirable impacts
    • Main idea 2: Both governments and businesses will have to pay for increased retirement pensions and health care costs
      • Supporting idea: tax-payers will have to bear a greater financial burden, and the young workforce will have to work harder and care for the elderly at the same time.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "Bear" tiếng anh 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In this day and age, people around the world are living longer than ever before due to advances in medicine and living standards. From my perspective, this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures.

On the one hand, an ageing population brings several benefits to society. Firstly, seniors possess abundant (adj: more than enough; phong phú, dồi dào) experience, which allows them to offer valuable (adj: very useful or important; quý giá) advice to young people. Having lived through a wide range of successes and failures, they have accumulated hard-won wisdom (n: knowledge gained through difficult experiences; kiến thức có được qua trải nghiệm khó khăn) that can guide and inspire younger generations. A typical example is Ruth Bader Ginsburg, the late U.S. Supreme Court Justice, who served as a passionate advocate (n: someone who strongly supports a cause; người ủng hộ nhiệt thành) for gender equality and offered meaningful guidance to young people pursuing their ambitions. Secondly, the growing number of elderly citizens means there is a greater pool of dedicated volunteers (n: people who willingly offer to do something without pay; tình nguyện viên tận tâm) for community and government projects. In many countries, senior groups are formed to provide free education for disadvantaged children or to clean up the environment, showing their altruistic spirit (n: selfless concern for the well-being of others; tinh thần vị tha) and civic responsibility.>> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

On the other hand, this demographic shift also poses significant challenges. One major issue is the shrinking workforce (n: decreasing number of working-age people; lực lượng lao động đang giảm), which can lead to economic stagnation. A lack of young workers and innovators means that fewer fresh ideas and technologies emerge, potentially slowing business and global economic growth. Japan, for instance, where the proportion of elderly citizens far exceeds that of the young, has already experienced these undesirable outcomes. Furthermore, both governments and businesses must allocate more funds to cover retirement pensions (n: regular payments made to retired people; lương hưu) and healthcare expenditures (n: money spent on medical services; chi phí y tế). As a result, taxpayers (n: people who pay taxes to the government; người nộp thuế) face a heavier financial burden, while younger employees may need to work longer hours and simultaneously care for their ageing parents.

In conclusion, although an ageing population can enrich society with wisdom and volunteerism, it can also hinder economic progress and strain public resources, making its advantages and disadvantages equally significant.

📘 New Vocabulary List

1. Abundant (adj: more than enough – phong phú, dồi dào)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: seniors possess abundant experience.
   Synonyms: plentiful, ample, copious
   Antonyms: scarce, limited, insufficient

2. Valuable (adj: very useful or important – quý giá)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: they can offer valuable advice to young people.
   Synonyms: precious, beneficial, priceless
   Antonyms: worthless, trivial, insignificant

3. Hard-won wisdom (n: knowledge gained through difficult experiences – kiến thức có được qua trải nghiệm khó khăn)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: they have accumulated hard-won wisdom that can guide younger generations.
   Synonyms: deep insight, practical knowledge, hard-earned experience
   Antonyms: ignorance, inexperience, naivety

4. Passionate advocate (n: someone who strongly supports a cause – người ủng hộ nhiệt thành)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Ruth Bader Ginsburg was a passionate advocate for gender equality.
   Synonyms: supporter, defender, champion
   Antonyms: opponent, critic, adversary

5. Dedicated volunteers (n: people who willingly offer to do something without pay – tình nguyện viên tận tâm)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: there is a greater pool of dedicated volunteers for community projects.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
   Synonyms: committed helpers, unpaid workers, selfless contributors
   Antonyms: employees, paid workers, hirelings

6. Altruistic spirit (n: selfless concern for others – tinh thần vị tha)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: showing their altruistic spirit and civic responsibility.
   Synonyms: selflessness, generosity, compassion
   Antonyms: selfishness, greed, egotism

7. Shrinking workforce (n: decreasing number of working-age people – lực lượng lao động đang giảm)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: one major issue is the shrinking workforce.
   Synonyms: declining labor force, dwindling manpower, reduced workforce
   Antonyms: growing labor force, expanding workforce, increasing manpower

8. Retirement pensions (n: regular payments made to retired people – lương hưu)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: cover retirement pensions and healthcare expenditures.
   Synonyms: retirement benefits, old-age payments, annuities
   Antonyms: wages, salary, earnings

9. Healthcare expenditures (n: money spent on medical services – chi phí y tế)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: cover retirement pensions and healthcare expenditures.
   Synonyms: medical costs, health spending, hospital expenses
   Antonyms: income, profit, revenue

10. Taxpayers (n: people who pay taxes to the government – người nộp thuế)
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: taxpayers face a heavier financial burden.
    Synonyms: citizens, contributors, ratepayers
    Antonyms: non-payers, defaulters, evaders

📗 Difficult Grammar Structures

1. Having + past participle (perfect participle clause)
   → Having lived through a wide range of successes and failures, they have accumulated hard-won wisdom.
   → Dịch: Sau khi trải qua nhiều thành công và thất bại, họ đã tích lũy được kinh nghiệm quý báu.
   ✅ Dùng để chỉ nguyên nhân hoặc bối cảnh trước của hành động chính.

2. A typical example is + noun clause
   → A typical example is Ruth Bader Ginsburg, the late U.S. Supreme Court Justice...
   → Dịch: Một ví dụ điển hình là Ruth Bader Ginsburg, cựu thẩm phán Tòa án Tối cao Hoa Kỳ.
   ✅ Dùng để giới thiệu ví dụ minh họa mạnh mẽ trong luận điểm.

3. Where-clause for result description
   → Japan, for instance, where the proportion of elderly citizens far exceeds that of the young, has already experienced these undesirable outcomes.
   → Dịch: Nhật Bản, nơi tỷ lệ người già cao hơn nhiều so với người trẻ, đã trải qua những hậu quả không mong muốn này.
   ✅ Cấu trúc này giúp bổ sung thông tin, tạo câu phức và liên kết ý mượt mà.

4. As a result, + clause (cause → effect)
   → As a result, taxpayers face a heavier financial burden.
   → Dịch: Do đó, người nộp thuế phải chịu gánh nặng tài chính lớn hơn.
   ✅ Dùng để thể hiện quan hệ nhân – quả rõ ràng, logic.

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