Phân tích "In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour.

What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng 2 question thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Modern parents tend to be too lenient or permissive.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The principal cause of poor discipline in schools is poor discipline at home)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Many children become accustomed to getting whatever they want, and they find it difficult to accept the demands of teachers or the limits imposed on them by school rules.
        • This results in many young people not listening to their teachers, being rude and actively rebelling against rules and regulations. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng giới từ AGAINST 
      • Example:  
    • Main idea 2: Schools and colleges have nearly no authority to take strict actions against impudent students.
      • Supporting idea: Rules have become lethargic and the students know that no extreme action can be taken against them, and thus they become more arrogant/disrespectful.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: When children misbehave or break the rules, parents should use reasonable punishments to demonstrate that actions have consequences. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ "reasonable" 
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: As students spend a substantial amount of time in schools, it is essential to grant justifiable and enough rights to them for taking corrective actions. 
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: For example, a teacher should be allowed to do stricter marking in exams for students who are not behaving well with them. This will make these students respectful towards the educators if they want to pass with good marks.

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