Phân tích "In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those crimes?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing.
What do you think are the main causes of crime?
How can we deal with those crimes?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Lack of work opportunities leads people to commit the crime
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Doing work is the only way to earn money and buy commodities, and in many places, people can not sustain their lives as they are unemployed. 
        • They remain jobless and might not even fulfil their basic needs; therefore, they turn to illegal ways of earning for livelihood >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng & word form của fulfil
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Another reason is is the increasing gap between the rich and the poor.
      • Supporting idea: One good illustration of this is that the people who are in dire need are bound to steal for their livelihood. 
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: More satisfactory jobs need to be created for poor. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the authorities should expand employment opportunities for the poor so that every individual could at least earn their living and live their life in a better way) 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • A recent study has concluded that majority of crimes can be curbed if basic necessities of people are met. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "basic" tiếng anh 
        • The poor would not be compelled to do misdeeds to fulfill their basic necessities.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: The government of the nations should devise proper programs to alleviate poverty and also should pass strict law in order to reduce crime rate. 
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: For instance, the UAE has introduced a new system that makes it easy to start your own business and have strict labor law to protect employee rights which ultimately helps to divert young people from any kind of criminal activities. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "protect"

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