Phân tích "In recent years, the pressure of students in university is increasing. They are pushed to work hard at a young age. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích & Sửa đề"Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and the government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" (ngày21/11/2020), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In recent years, the pressure of students in university is increasing. They are pushed to work hard at a young age. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

In recent years, the pressure of students in university is increasing. They are pushed to work hard at a young age. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng NEGATIVE):
  • • Main idea 1: In some cases, there may be a disconnect between the skills graduates possess and the skills demanded by the job market. 
      • Supporting idea: This can lead to unemployment or underemployment, as graduates struggle to find positions that align with their qualifications.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
      • Example: A recent English literature graduate faced challenges finding a job until they realized the importance of aligning their skills with employer demands, leading them to acquire new skills in technical writing, content marketing, and social media marketing, ultimately securing a suitable position as a technical writer.
    • Main idea 2: A higher number of university graduates can intensify competition for jobs, making it more challenging for individuals to secure employment, particularly in fields where demand is not commensurate with supply.
      • Supporting idea: In certain industries or geographic regions, the number of job openings may not align with the volume of graduates seeking employment, resulting in a job market imbalance.

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