Phân tích"In some countries, old people who retire from work spend the money on themselves (e.g. holiday/medical treatment) rather than save money and bequeath their children the entire savings. Is this a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"In some countries, old people who retire from work spend the money on themselves (e.g. holiday/medical treatment) rather than save money and bequeath their children the entire savings. Is this a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

In some countries, old people who retire from work spend the money on themselves (e.g. holiday/medical treatment) rather than save money and bequeath their children the entire savings. Is this a positive or negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng positive):
  • Positive
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao positive 
    • Main idea: Old people have a right to spend their own money on what makes them happy 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Old people don’t need to sacrifice their saving for retirement to help their kids financially 
      • Retirement is the time that old people are likely to find that they have more free time to devote to their hobbies and passions. >> IETLS TUTOR hướng dẫn phân biệt "unlike, unlikely, alike, likely & like" tiếng anh
    • Example: My uncle, John, is a retired individual who has worked diligently throughout his life to secure a comfortable retirement. With no children to support, he enjoys the freedom to travel extensively and indulge in his passion for golf, fully embracing the well-deserved joys of retirement. Despite societal expectations, John firmly believes in his right to use his hard-earned savings to pursue his happiness during his golden years, a testament to his years of dedication and effort.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao positive 
    • Main idea: Their kids should be on their own, and old parents don’t need to help adult kids financially (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: Giving adult children financial support is a bad idea)
    • Supporting idea: 
      • People who receive financial assistance from their parents or grandparents have come to expect that their financial needs will be met by their parents, so they don't plan for the future >> Most of these people have struggled with money>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • When parents give money to an adult child, they’re compromising their own financial health
    • Example: My aunt, Mary, and her husband Rob, worked diligently throughout their lives to secure a comfortable retirement. With two adult children, Michael and Sarah, they have been providing financial assistance even after their children graduated from college and started their own families, but they've come to realize that this practice has hindered their children's financial responsibility and compromised their own financial health

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