Phân tích "Some people think that young people should spend more of their free time at home with their families, and spend less time entertaining outside. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.'' IELTS Writing Task 2

· Đề thi IELTS thật,Task 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that young people should spend more of their free time at home with their families, and spend less time entertaining outside. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

Some people think that young people should spend more of their free time at home with their families, and spend less time entertaining outside. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Others disagree
      • Main idea 1: it is a great opportunity to break the monotony of the daily life
      • Main idea 2:  It is an excellent way to learn interpersonal skills in order to make new connections at work to be successful. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý cách dùng "so that / in order that / so as to / in order to" 
        • Supporting idea: People who did not interact much outside of their family while growing up could turn out to be introvert and fail miserably in making real connection at their workplace.
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that young people should spend more of their free time at home with their families, and spend less time entertaining outside & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
      • Main idea 1: Young people can learn moral and ethical values in a safe way when they spend time with family >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "spend" tiếng anh
      • Main idea 2: This time can be used to strengthen the bond with their family.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • If they do not spend quality time with their loved ones, the ties between the family will not be strong enough >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "quality" tiếng anh 
          • Family time is of utmost importance for young ones.
        • Example: Studies have shown that children who spend more time with their family have better manners and are more conscientious than their counterparts.

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