Phân tích "In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1: What problems will this cause for individuals and society? 
    • Main idea 1: (Viết về individuals) It will create problems for the elderly themselves as they often find it difficult to cope with the changing times >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "time" & "times"
      • Supporting idea: Since older people are reluctant to change and to adopt new technology, they may sometimes find it challenging to fulfil their basic needs >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & word form của "fulfil / fulfill" 
      • Example: For instance, many supermarkets or transportation systems use automated billing and ticketing systems that may put the elderly people behind the curve.
    • Main idea 2: (Viết về society)  it puts a heavy burden on the healthcare system >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu TỪ VỰNG TOPIC "IDEAL SOCIETY" 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Older people are more vulnerable to chronic diseases, such as heart attacks or diabetes, and that requires special medical treatments to be effectively treated >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu "TẤT TẦN TẬT" TỪ A ĐẾN Z TỪ VỰNG VỀ BỆNH DỊCH
        • The government might have to devote a larger budget to healthcare in order to serve the growing demands of an ageing population.
      • Example: Japan's aging population crisis, characterized by the world's highest life expectancy and rapid demographic aging, poses a significant challenge as the burden of chronic diseases such as diabetes, dementia, and cancer strains the healthcare system, resulting in prolonged hospital stays, heightened demand for specialized care, and the potential for shortages of medical professionals.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2:  Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.
    • Main idea 1: educational programs related to technology should be designed and encouraged by the governments for the seniors >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "encourage" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: Teaching seniors about technology ensures their inclusion in the digital age, allowing them to connect with family, friends, and the broader community through online platforms, emails, and social media.
      • Example: Singapore's Silver Connect program, initiated in 2017, offers free digital literacy workshops and support for seniors at community centers and libraries, encompassing basic computer skills, internet navigation, communication tools, and online government services, enabling seniors to connect with loved ones, access information, and participate in online activities.
    • Main idea 2:  it is important to educate people about the importance of money management and saving for retirement. 
      • Supporting idea:
        • Individuals from a young age should be persuaded to prepare for post-retirement life.
        • By doing this, when people reach their retirement age, they will have a certain amount of money to take care of themselves without the need to depend on their children or the government >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu từ vựng topic "trẻ em (children) & lễ quốc tết thiếu nhi 1/6"
      • Example: The UK's "Moneybox" program provides schools with resources and interactive tools to educate children about fundamental financial concepts such as budgeting, saving, and responsible spending, fostering the development of healthier financial habits and a clearer understanding of saving for the future. 

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