Phân tích "In the past, people ate local food in season. Nowadays, people buy a variety of food from all over the world and any season. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích đề thi "spend their leisure time with their colleagues" IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In the past, people ate local food in season. Nowadays, people buy a variety of food from all over the world and any season. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

In the past, people ate local food in season. Nowadays, people buy a variety of food from all over the world and any season. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages > advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages > advantages
      • Main idea: The transportation of food around the world greatly contributes to global warming due to the large amount of carbon emissions produced during the process. >> IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp Ideas & Từ vựng topic "global warming" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: Eating locally grown produce will help to reduce the distance that food travels, helping to reduce the negative effects of carbon emissions which are released from vehicles during transport.
        • Example: The trendy avocado toast craze comes with a hidden cost. Avocados often journey from distant countries like Mexico or New Zealand, racking up emissions during transportation and requiring intensive water resources for cultivation. This not only contributes to global warming but also strains water supplies in local communities.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: It not only leads to increase in price of the food but also reduces its nutritional value. >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Word form của "nutrition"
        • Supporting idea: Foods travel from local farmers to ultimate consumers and have to go through various stages to be sold in national or international markets. These stages may involve bulk-buying, processing, storing and packaging and so on >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý PARAPHRASE "AND SO ON" (Diễn đạt "vân vân..."tiếng anh)
        • Example: While frozen peas offer convenience, the blanching, freezing, and packaging processes, along with associated transportation costs, can inflate prices and result in a less nutritious option compared to fresh, locally grown alternatives
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý ĐỂ ĐẠT IELTS 7.0 WRITING, SPEAKING NÊN HỌC TỪ VỰNG ĐAO TO BÚA LỚN?
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "consequence" tiếng anh
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages
      • Main idea 1: if non-locally grown foods are purchased less often on the market, local people will therefore have fewer opportunities to experience specialties and healthy products from other regions.
        • Supporting idea: Without access to exotic foods from far away, consumers are restrained to local produce which is often seasonal. Given better living standards, many families can afford the extra costs of shipping and food preservation to try non-locally grown foods, which diversifies their diet and satisfies their appetite. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "appetite" tiếng anh
        • Example: For example, farmers in the French Alps might struggle to compete with cheaper imported cheese, leading to the potential loss of traditional cheesemaking methods and cultural heritage.
      • Main idea 2: if local foods dominate the market, customers will fall victim to price inflation since local merchants would take advantage of this opportunity to increase prices.
        • Supporting idea:
          • A dominance of local foods may lead to a limited number of suppliers in the market, reducing competition.
          • With fewer alternatives, merchants could exploit their market position to raise prices without the fear of losing customers to competitors.
        • Example: In some niche markets like organic produce, the number of local suppliers might be smaller compared to conventional options. This could lead to situations where local organic farmers, without significant competition from conventional alternatives, raise prices beyond what consumers might pay in a more diverse market.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages
      • Main idea 1: The transportation of food around the world greatly contributes to global warming due to the large amount of carbon emissions produced during the process. >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích: Contribute to sth
        • Supporting idea: Eating locally grown produce will help to reduce the distance that food travels, helping to reduce the negative effects of carbon emissions which are released from vehicles during transport.
        • Example: The trendy avocado toast craze comes with a hidden cost. Avocados often journey from distant countries like Mexico or New Zealand, racking up emissions during transportation and requiring intensive water resources for cultivation. This not only contributes to global warming but also strains water supplies in local communities.
      • Main idea 2: It not only leads to increase in price of the food but also reduces its nutritional value.
        • Supporting idea: Foods travel from local farmers to ultimate consumers and have to go through various stages to be sold in national or international markets. These stages may involve bulk-buying, processing, storing and packaging and so on >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích phrasal verb: go through
        • Example: While frozen peas offer convenience, the blanching, freezing, and packaging processes, along with associated transportation costs, can inflate prices and result in a less nutritious option compared to fresh, locally grown alternatives

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