Phân tích"In today’s world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can art tell us about life that science and technology cannot?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 28/10/2023 & 30/12/2023)

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• In today’s world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can art tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

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  • Body 1: Nêu điều 1 art tell us about life that science and technology cannot
    • Main idea: Art, through various forms like music and painting, allows for the emotional expression of complex human experiences, feelings, and nuances that go beyond quantitative data.
      • Supporting idea: Art is inherently subjective and open to interpretation, allowing individuals to connect with it on a personal and emotional level.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: Vincent van Gogh's "The Starry Night" powerfully expresses complex human emotions through its swirling night sky and vibrant colors, offering a glimpse into the artist's emotional turmoil and showcasing how art transcends quantitative data to evoke profound feelings and wonder.
  • Body 2: Nêu điều 2 art tell us about life that science and technology cannot 
    • Main idea: Art plays a role in preserving and conveying cultural heritage, traditions, and stories that may not be captured by scientific methods.
      • Supporting idea: Art often incorporates symbols and iconography that carry cultural significance, conveying stories, beliefs, and values that may not be readily discernible through scientific analysis.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
      • Example: Aboriginal bark paintings of Australia exemplify how art preserves and conveys cultural heritage, telling ancient Dreamtime stories through rich symbolism, iconography, and complex cultural narratives.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In today’s era of cutting-edge (tiên tiến, hiện đại) science and technology, artists such as musicians, painters, and writers still hold an irreplaceable (không thể thay thế được) place in society. This is because art conveys unique insights into human life that scientific methods and technological innovations cannot fully capture.

First, art allows for the emotional expression (sự bày tỏ cảm xúc) of multifaceted (nhiều mặt, phức tạp) human experiences. While science deals with objective (khách quan) facts and measurable data, art embodies subjectivity, giving voice to intangible feelings and subtle nuances. For instance, Vincent van Gogh’s The Starry Night with its swirling patterns and vibrant (sặc sỡ, đầy sức sống) colors, offers a poignant (sâu sắc, gây xúc động) portrayal of inner turmoil. Unlike technology, which may analyze brain waves or emotional responses, art transcends data to evoke profound emotions, allowing individuals to engage in a deeply personal and reflective experience.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Second, art preserves and conveys cultural heritage (di sản văn hóa) in a way that science and technology cannot. Through symbols, myths, and iconography (hệ thống biểu tượng), art communicates collective values, beliefs, and histories that remain invisible to empirical analysis. Aboriginal bark paintings in Australia, for example, illustrate ancient (cổ xưa) Dreamtime stories, embedding complex cultural narratives within visual symbolism. Such creations not only record traditions but also connect generations, reminding societies of their shared identity (bản sắc chung). Science may explain the pigments used in these artworks, but it cannot capture the cultural soul that these masterpieces embody.

In conclusion, while science and technology advance human knowledge, art uniquely reveals the depths of emotion and culture, enriching our understanding of life in ways that no laboratory or machine ever could.

New Vocabulary with Explanation

1. cutting-edge (tiên tiến, hiện đại) – modern, highly advanced

   • Synonyms: state-of-the-art, innovative, pioneering

   • Antonyms: outdated, old-fashioned, obsolete

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: In today’s era of cutting-edge science and technology…

2. irreplaceable (không thể thay thế được) – impossible to substitute

   • Synonyms: invaluable, unique, priceless

   • Antonyms: replaceable, dispensable, unnecessary

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: …artists still hold an irreplaceable place in society.

3. multifaceted (nhiều mặt, phức tạp) – having many aspects

   • Synonyms: complex, varied, diverse

   • Antonyms: simple, straightforward, one-dimensional

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: …the emotional expression of multifaceted human experiences.

4. vibrant (sặc sỡ, đầy sức sống) – full of energy or color

   • Synonyms: brilliant, vivid, lively

   • Antonyms: dull, lifeless, faded

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: …its swirling patterns and vibrant colors…

5. poignant (sâu sắc, gây xúc động) – deeply moving or emotional

   • Synonyms: touching, emotional, affecting

   • Antonyms: unmoving, bland, indifferent

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: …offers a poignant portrayal of inner turmoil.

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. While-clause contrast

   • While science deals with objective facts and measurable data, art embodies subjectivity…
     → Trong khi khoa học xử lý các sự thật khách quan và dữ liệu đo lường được, nghệ thuật lại thể hiện tính chủ quan…

2. Relative clause for emphasis

   • …art communicates collective values, beliefs, and histories that remain invisible to empirical analysis.
     → Nghệ thuật truyền đạt các giá trị, niềm tin và lịch sử mà vẫn vô hình đối với phân tích thực nghiệm.

3. Not only… but also structure

   • Such creations not only record traditions but also connect generations…
     → Những tác phẩm này không chỉ ghi lại truyền thống mà còn kết nối các thế hệ…

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