Phân tích"It is better to be unemployed in jobs rather than to be employed in jobs even if they don't feel happy or enjoy. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (đề thi 29/5/2022 computer-based)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"It is better to be unemployed in jobs rather than to be employed in jobs even if they don't feel happy or enjoy. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (đề thi 29/5/2022 computer-based)

It is better to be unemployed in jobs rather than to be employed in jobs even if they don't feel happy or enjoy. Do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea 1: Firstly, if people don’t like what they do, it will be a torture for them, and I don’t believe that they can be persistent and productive under such a situation  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "torture" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Although salary is almost everyone’s concern when they get a job, how can they become excellent and improve themselves without their fondness for their job  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "improve" tiếng anh
      • Example: For example, a lot of famous researchers made their career choices not because of appealing wages, but because they were passionate about science.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea 2: Secondly, doing what we like keeps us motivated and therefore leads to a career growth  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng THEREFORE & HENCE trong tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: People who love their jobs can easily excel in their fields of work and achieve better results than those, who put salary on the first place
      • Example: 

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