Phân tích "An increasing number of people are choosing plastic surgery. Why do people choose to change the way they look? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (đề thi 2/6/2022 computer-based)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "An increasing number of people are choosing plastic surgery. Why do people choose to change the way they look? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (đề thi 2/6/2022 computer-based)

"An increasing number of people are choosing plastic surgery. Why do people choose to change the way they look? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (đề thi 2/6/2022 computer-based)

• Dạng 2 question thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 Why do people choose to change the way they look? 
    • Main idea 1: people try to change their appearance when they are not confident of themselves (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: they lack self-confidence)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Many people suffer from low-self-esteem due to lack of body confidence and self criticism.
        • In order to improve their look many people today prefer this kind of surgery to boost their confidence level. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng & Word form của "boost"
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: The second main reason is media influence (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: advertisement on media sets a model image of a man or a woman, which performs an ideology of beauty) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng topic Advertising 
      • Suporting idea:
        • Some people tend to criticize their physical figures when they compare their image to an ideal body frame portrayed by the media. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "tend" tiếng anh 
        • Celebrities usually do plastic surgery for looking more modern in the present time, so mostly youngsters follow the footsteps and they also do this for looking perfect in front of others.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 Do you think it is a positive or negative development? - negative 
    • Main idea 1: The end result is not what expected and in this case, it can lead to a great deal of distress.
      • Supporting idea: There are millions of failed cosmetic surgeries reported and many people are suffering from depression after that. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "depression" 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: They do not increase a person’s quality of life in the long run. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Just looking good is unlikely to make someone happy or successful.
        • The physical appearance plays only a very small role in social life. 
        • Due to this misconception people focus on their looks instead of their character or personality. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "character" tiếng anh
      • Example: 

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