Phân tích "Large companies use sport events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi giấy 9/7/2022)

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE  có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea 1: without sponsorship, many sporting competitions and events could not operate.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: Large sporting events, such as the FIFA World Cup or the Olympics, require millions of dollars to organise and coordinate, and sponsors provide a lot of this much needed money. If there were no sponsors, the price of a spectator ticket would be extremely high as this would be the only revenue to cover the costs of the event, and as a result, many people could not afford to attend, which may leave the event organisers facing bankruptcy.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea 2: Sponsoring companies are able to gain publicity and recognition through their association with the event and the organization. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "company" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: It leads to increased awareness of the company brand name.
      • Example:
• IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn thêm ý nếu muốn viết TOTALLY AGREE 
  • Main idea 1: sport endorsement could harm the reputation of companies >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn CÁCH DÙNG "HARM / HARMFUL" TIẾNG ANH - Vocabular
    • Supporting idea: If the athlete or athletes endorsing a brand become involved in scandal, drug abuse, or violence, that brand could become associated with that scandal, and face consumer boycotts >> IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp Từ vựng topic "VIOLENCE & ARGUMENT" 
    • Example:
  • Main idea 2: it can be a risky financial investment.
    • Supporting idea: Profit, improved brand image or increased sales cannot be guaranteed for the sponsor.
    • Example: if the endorsed athlete falls ill, gets injured, does not perform well, there is a possibility that the sponsor will not receive the profit that they had originally expected. >> IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp "Tất tần tật" từ vựng Academic bắt đầu bằng E nên học
  • Hoặc có thể tham khảo thêm một vài ý khác cùng IELTS TUTOR:
    • Main idea: When a wrong company associates itself with a major sporting event, it can tarnish the reputation of the event. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn CÁCH DÙNG TỪ "MAJOR" TIẾNG ANH
    • Supporting idea: When young people are exposed to certain advertising, they can easily develop a positive association with those products and start to use them.
    • Example:
      • It is not uncommon for tobacco or liquor companies to sponsor sporting events. Since most of the audience of such events are young people, this sends a very wrong message to the society.
      • It is also common for sportspersons and teams to endorse soft drinks like Coca-Cola and Pepsi although they are not healthy. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt ALTHOUGH/ THOUGH/ IN SPITE OF / DESPITE