Phân tích"People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 3/3/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 3/3/2023)

People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Women who have children at an older age are at a higher risk of complications during pregnancy and childbirth, as well as a higher risk of having children with genetic disorders.
      • Supporting idea:
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    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Children of older parents may feel disconnected from their parents' generation, and may not have the same kind of relationship with their grandparents as children of younger parents.
      • Supporting idea:
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  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: People who have children at an older age are usually more financially stable, which means that they can provide better for their children.
        • Supporting idea:
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      • Main idea 2: Older parents often have more life experience and are more mature, which can be beneficial when raising children >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ"BENEFICIAL"tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Women who have children at an older age are at a higher risk of complications during pregnancy and childbirth, as well as a higher risk of having children with genetic disorders.
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Children of older parents may feel disconnected from their parents' generation, and may not have the same kind of relationship with their grandparents as children of younger parents.
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 

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