Phân tích"Many customs and traditional ways of behaviors are no longer relevant to the modern life and no worth keeping. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi computer-based 26.11.2022 & 30/9/2023 )

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Many customs and traditional ways of behaviors are no longer relevant to the modern life and no worth keeping. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Many customs and traditional ways of behaviors are no longer relevant to the modern life and no worth keeping. Do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: there are some conventional values which the youngsters should foster as those perspectives are still useful and beneficial in this contemporary era)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Values such as honesty, hard work, helping the needy are lessons taught to us by our forefathers and they need to be carried on.
        • Young people would lead happier lives if they had a more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and neighbourliness. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ SENSE trong tiếng anh
      • Example: 
        • Older generations attach great importance to working hard, doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job market. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "behavior" & "misbehavior"
        • Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: by following mores from the past, young people will have a foundation to judge their present and future actions. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "following" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
        • Tradition serves as an increasingly important guide in a world with few fixed values. 
        • Without these customs to guide their behaviour, young people would be at the mercy of the values espoused in popular media. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "custom" tiếng anh
        • As the world has become more secular, religious values have declined but cultural traditions remain intact. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Word form của "remain"
      • Example:
        • A standout example of this would be the strong familial ties in Asian nations such as Japan, Korea, China, and Vietnam where children in these nations are expected to listen to the advice of their parents, maintain cultural traditions, and behave within certain ethical bounds.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Some people argue that traditional textbook-based learning has become outdated, as students today find books tedious (boring / nhàm chán) and uninspiring. They believe that modern tools such as films, television, video games, and computers could serve as more effective educational alternatives. I partly agree with this viewpoint, although I believe books still hold indispensable value in education.

On the one hand, incorporating multimedia tools into the learning process can indeed make education more engaging (captivating / hấp dẫn) and relatable. Visual aids, such as educational videos or interactive games, cater to diverse learning styles (nhiều kiểu học khác nhau), particularly for visual and kinesthetic learners (người học qua hình ảnh và vận động). For example, complex historical events or scientific processes can be vividly illustrated (minh họa sống động) through animations, making it easier for students to understand and retain information. Moreover, such tools often provide instant feedback (phản hồi ngay lập tức), which helps learners track their progress and stay motivated.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

On the other hand, relying solely on digital media for education may lead to superficial learning (học nông) and reduced concentration. Books encourage deep thinking, patience, and critical analysis (phân tích phản biện), which are crucial for academic development. Furthermore, excessive screen exposure at a young age may result in digital fatigue (mệt mỏi kỹ thuật số) or even attention disorders. Books, by contrast, promote focused and uninterrupted reading, allowing learners to develop their cognitive endurance (sức bền về nhận thức). Thus, completely eliminating textbooks could have long-term consequences on students' mental and intellectual growth.

In conclusion, while digital tools can complement classroom learning, books should not be entirely replaced due to their unique benefits in fostering deeper thinking and comprehension.

🔍 New Vocabulary with Definitions

1. tedious (adj) – boring, repetitive | nhàm chán

2. engaging (adj) – interesting, captivating | hấp dẫn

3. diverse learning styles (noun phrase) – varied ways in which individuals absorb and process information | nhiều kiểu học khác nhau

4. visual and kinesthetic learners (noun phrase) – those who learn better through images or movement | người học qua hình ảnh và vận động

5. vividly illustrated (verb phrase) – shown clearly and in a detailed, visual manner | được minh họa sống động

6. instant feedback (noun phrase) – immediate response to a learner’s performance | phản hồi ngay lập tức

7. superficial learning (noun phrase) – shallow understanding of a topic | học nông

8. critical analysis (noun phrase) – careful examination and evaluation of information | phân tích phản biện

9. digital fatigue (noun phrase) – mental exhaustion from prolonged screen use | mệt mỏi kỹ thuật số

10. cognitive endurance (noun phrase) – mental stamina required for sustained intellectual activity | sức bền về nhận thức

🔁 Synonyms & Antonyms of "tedious" (used in the essay)

• Synonyms: boring, monotonous, dull

• Antonyms: exciting, fascinating, stimulating

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Some people argue that traditional textbook-based learning has become outdated, as students today find books tedious and uninspiring.

🔍 Advanced Grammar Structures

1. Reduced relative clause

   • "Students today find books tedious and uninspiring."
     → Rút gọn mệnh đề quan hệ: which are tedious and uninspiring → tedious and uninspiring
     → Học sinh ngày nay thấy sách vở (vốn) nhàm chán và không gây hứng thú.

2. Conditional clause with inversion (not used in this essay but useful)

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Were books to be completely eliminated, students might lose their ability to concentrate.
     → Nếu sách bị loại bỏ hoàn toàn, học sinh có thể mất khả năng tập trung.

3. Complex noun phrases

   • "Visual and kinesthetic learners"
     → Người học theo cách trực quan và vận động

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