Phân tích"The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 24/6/2023) - Kèm bài mẫu + giải thích từ vựng

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers." IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 24/6/2023)

The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers.

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  • Overall:
    • The company mostly failed to meet its targets, with the exception of 2003. 
    • The number of complaints received by the company showed a consistent rise over time, apart from a temporary decrease in 2001. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ"consistent"tiếng anh 
  • Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1
    • The target for the first two years of the survey period was set at 86% of buses arriving on time. However, this goal was never achieved, with 85% and 82% of buses arriving punctually in 1999 and 2000, respectively. >> IELTS TUTOR Phân biệt ON TIME và IN TIME trong tiếng anh 
    • The trend continued in 2001 and 2002, with only 84.5% and 84% of buses arriving on time, despite the target being lowered to 85%. 
    • 2003 stood out as the only year when the company met its target, with nearly 85% of actual on-time buses compared to the set target of 84.5%.
  • Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2
    • The number of complaints per 1000 passengers started at 70 in 1999. 
    • Over the years, it exhibited an upward trend with a minor dip to just above 80 in 2001, followed by a continuous increase, reaching 120 negative feedbacks in 2003.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The two charts illustrate the on-time performance (n. hiệu suất đúng giờ – the percentage of buses arriving as scheduled) and customer dissatisfaction rate (n. tỷ lệ khách không hài lòng – the number of complaints per 1000 passengers) for a bus company from 1999 to 2003.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Overall, the company consistently underperformed (adv + v. liên tục hoạt động kém – regularly failed to meet expectations) in achieving its punctuality goals, except in 2003. Meanwhile, the complaint rate showed a steady escalation (n. sự leo thang đều đặn – a continuous increase) over the period, apart from a brief drop in 2001.

In terms of punctuality, the company fell short of its 86% target in the first two years, recording 85% and 82% respectively. Although the target was reduced to 85% in 2001 and 84.5% in 2003, it was only in the latter year that the actual performance matched expectations, hitting a near-perfect (adj. gần như hoàn hảo – very close to being perfect) 85%.

Turning to complaints, figures rose from 70 per 1000 passengers in 1999 to 120 in 2003. Although 2001 saw a marginal dip (n. sự giảm nhẹ – a slight decrease) to just over 80, the upward trajectory (n. xu hướng đi lên – rising pattern) resumed thereafter.

📌 Difficult Grammar Structures & Examples

1. Complex noun phrases

   • “The two charts illustrate the on-time performance and customer dissatisfaction rate...”
     → Hai biểu đồ minh họa hiệu suất đúng giờ và tỷ lệ phàn nàn của khách hàng.

2. Passive voice

   • “Although the target was reduced...”
     → Mặc dù mục tiêu đã được giảm...

3. Contrast clauses

   • “...except in 2003.”
     → Ngoại trừ năm 2003.

4. Relative clause

   • “...recording 85% and 82% respectively.”
     → Ghi nhận lần lượt 85% và 82%.

5. Prepositional phrases for time

   • “Over the years...”
     → Qua các năm...

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