Phân tích"Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 06/04/2023)

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Phân tích"Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 06/04/2023)

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• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: As individuals age, fertility declines, and the chances of experiencing fertility issues or complications increase. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The risks of pregnancy-related complications, such as gestational diabetes or chromosomal abnormalities, also rise with age. 
        • Assisted reproductive technologies may be required, which can be costly and emotionally challenging.
      • Example: Couples in their mid-30s, facing trouble conceiving naturally, may have to undergo in vitro fertilization (IVF), an expensive and emotionally challenging assisted reproductive technology.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Raising children requires a significant amount of energy and stamina. 
      • Supporting idea: Older parents may find it more physically demanding to keep up with the demands of young children, especially as they enter their later years.
      • Example: My uncle, who had children later in life, struggle to keep up with his energetic 5-year-old daughter due to his age-related physical limitations.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: Waiting until later in life often means that individuals or couples have had more time to establish their careers and achieve financial stability. 
        • Supporting idea: This can provide a more secure environment for raising children, including better access to healthcare, education, and other resources.
        • Example: My brother, a 40-year-old professional, focused on building a successful career before having children, which resulted in financial stability and a solid foundation to provide for their future family.
      • Main idea 2: As people age, they generally gain more life experience and emotional maturity. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • This can translate into being better equipped to handle the challenges and responsibilities of parenting. 
          • Older parents may have more patience, wisdom, and a better understanding of their own values, which can positively influence their parenting style.
        • Example: 
          • Research conducted at the University of Michigan analyzed data from a large sample of adults and found that emotional well-being tends to improve with age. 
          • Older individuals reported higher levels of life satisfaction, happiness, and overall emotional well-being compared to younger adults.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: As individuals age, fertility declines, and the chances of experiencing fertility issues or complications increase. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • The risks of pregnancy-related complications, such as gestational diabetes or chromosomal abnormalities, also rise with age. 
          • Assisted reproductive technologies may be required, which can be costly and emotionally challenging.
        • Example: Couples in their mid-30s, facing trouble conceiving naturally, may have to undergo in vitro fertilization (IVF), an expensive and emotionally challenging assisted reproductive technology.
      • Main idea 2: Raising children requires a significant amount of energy and stamina. 
        • Supporting idea: Older parents may find it more physically demanding to keep up with the demands of young children, especially as they enter their later years.
        • Example: My uncle, who had children later in life, struggle to keep up with his energetic 5-year-old daughter due to his age-related physical limitations.

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