Phân tích "Some international companies are very powerful now and many people believe that it is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your reasons and relevant examples." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

· Writing,Task 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some international companies are very powerful now and many people believe that it is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your reasons and relevant examples." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

Some international companies are very powerful now and many people believe that it is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your reasons and relevant examples.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

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  • Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
      • Main idea: Large companies often contribute to economic growth by creating jobs, generating tax revenue, and investing in infrastructure development. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Large companies typically employ a significant number of people directly, providing them with stable employment and income. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "employment" tiếng anh
          • Large companies generate substantial tax revenue for governments through corporate taxes, income taxes paid by employees, and other forms of taxation. This revenue can be used to fund public services, infrastructure projects, education, healthcare, and other initiatives that contribute to economic development.
          • Many large companies invest in infrastructure development, such as building or upgrading manufacturing facilities, distribution centers, research and development centers, and offices. 
        • Example: 
          • Apple employs a vast workforce worldwide, ranging from engineers and designers to retail staff and customer support representatives. 
          • By creating job opportunities, Apple not only provides income to employees but also contributes to the overall employment rate, supporting economic stability in various regions.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
      • Main idea:  Powerful companies often have the resources and expertise to invest in research and development, leading to technological advancements and improved products or services.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • They can fund large teams of researchers, engineers, and scientists, and invest in cutting-edge equipment, laboratories, and facilities necessary for conducting advanced research.
          • These companies attract top talent from various fields due to their reputation, resources, and career advancement opportunities. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "attract" tiếng anh
          • By assembling a skilled and diverse workforce, powerful companies can drive innovation through collaboration, expertise, and knowledge sharing among their employees.
        • Example: One notable example is Google, a subsidiary of Alphabet Inc. Google is known for its significant investments in research and development, which have resulted in numerous technological advancements and innovative products and services such as Google Search, Google Maps, Google AI and Google Cloud
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