Phân tích"Online shopping is becoming more popular. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of work required?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 22/02/2020)

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Online shopping is becoming more popular. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of work/jobs required?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
• Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 ”How could this trend affect our environment”
  • Main idea 1: It can help reduce the number of private vehicles travelling to brick-and-mortar stores since orders of customers from different locations can be grouped and delivered to homes at once. 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • This will eventually lessen a great deal of exhaust fumes which is one of the causes of air pollution (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: the growth of e-shopping has contributed remarkably in reducing carbon footprint because of the fact that it eliminates car trips that shoppers make to buy goods at shopping malls and showrooms) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải thích: Contribute to sth
      • Online shopping may be more sustainable with delivery trucks sending more packages to as many consumers as possible. 
    • Example: 
  • Main idea 2: Physical stores require a lot of energy and upkeep.
    • Supporting idea: This produces more carbon emissions and waste than the relatively bare-boned operation of online stores that only have warehouses.
    • Example: 
• Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2”How could this trend affect the kinds of work required” 
  • Main idea 1: this trend has created a variety of work opportunities for people, especially for those who major in information technology. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân biệt "ESPECIALLY" & "SPECIALLY" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: 
      • To maintain an e-store, there will be a need for many kinds of jobs such as database administrators, web designers, delivery drivers, etc. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng SUCH AS trong tiếng anh
      • The increase of ecommerce companies will spur employment needs for workers involved in digital marketing, website design or system maintenance.
    • Example: 
  • Main idea 2: Since online companies can reach out to a wide range of customers, more people are needed to work in the field of logistics in order for online goods to be packaged properly.
    • Supporting idea:
    • Example: Amazon, the leading company in e-commerce worldwide, has allied with two shipping companies UPS and Fedex to handle their shipments in America and abroad.

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