Phân tích"The maps below show the changes that took place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 22/02/2020)

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The maps below show the changes that took place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 22/02/2020)

I. Đề bài

The maps below show the changes that took place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014.

The maps below show the changes that took place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Overall:
    • The town showed the complete obliteration of the industrial area to make room for more residential, recreational and academic amenities  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The landscape of the town completely changed with the construction of the replacement of the industrial area with residential, recreational and academic amenities)
    • The town’s infrastructure was also renovated with the addition of a harbor and more footpaths. >> IETLS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "infrastructure" tiếng anh
  • Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1
    • On the vast grassland stretching from the center to the southern part of the town was sited an industrial area  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: In 2009, the major part of the town was covered by the industrial area)
    • There was the footpath which encircled the center of the town. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng & cách chỉ phương hướng tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2
    • In 2014, the industrial area was demolished to make room for a number of trees and amenities. 
    • In the North, a part of the industrial zone was replaced by a newly-built swimming pool while there were no alterations to the school, convention center, and two swimming pools. 
    • In the center of the town, there was construction of three residential buildings, adjacent to the three previous ones. 
    • A university building was erected to the West of the area
    • In the seashore of the town, a harbor was constructed

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