Phân tích "People continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happens? How can crime be stopped?​" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "People continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happens? How can crime be stopped?​" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

People continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happens? How can crime be stopped?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1: There are several reasons why people may continue to commit crimes even after being punished for them. 
    • Main idea 1: Many criminal justice systems focus on punishing offenders rather than rehabilitating them >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng & Phân biệt RATHER THAN - INSTEAD OF tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: This can result in offenders who are not equipped with the skills and resources to successfully reintegrate into society after their release.
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    • Main idea 2: Poverty and social inequality can contribute to criminal behavior, as individuals who lack access to basic needs such as food, housing, and education may turn to crime as a means of survival or as a way to achieve financial stability.
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  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: Providing offenders with access to rehabilitation and support programs can help to address the root causes of criminal behavior and equip them with the skills necessary to successfully reintegrate into society >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "behavior" & "misbehavior" 
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    • Main idea 2: Addressing poverty and social inequality through initiatives such as education and job training programs can reduce the likelihood that individuals will turn to crime as a means of survival.
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