Phân tích "Rich countries should not employ skilled labor (such as scientists, engineers, doctors) from poor countries, as the poor countries need the workers more. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

· Task 2,Writing

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Rich countries should not employ skilled labor (such as scientists, engineers, doctors) from poor countries, as the poor countries need the workers more. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

Rich countries should not employ skilled labor (such as scientists, engineers, doctors) from poor countries, as the poor countries need the workers more. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

  • Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
      • Main idea: The free movement of skilled professionals benefits both the individuals seeking better opportunities and the countries employing them. 
        • Supporting idea: Rich countries can provide a platform for skilled individuals to showcase their talents, gain valuable experience, and contribute to cutting-edge research and innovation that can have global benefits. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"innovation"tiếng anh 
        • Example
          • The United Kingdom is home to some of the world's leading universities, such as Oxford and Cambridge. These universities attract talented students from around the world, and they provide them with a platform to showcase their talents and contribute to cutting-edge research.
          • The United States is home to some of the world's leading technology companies, such as Google and Apple. These companies attract talented engineers and scientists from around the world, and they provide them with a platform to develop new technologies that can have a global impact.
          • The European Union has a number of research organizations that support cutting-edge research. These organizations attract talented researchers from around the world, and they provide them with a platform to collaborate on research projects that can have a global impact. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "RESEARCH" như Noun & Verb tiếng anh
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
      • Main idea: Skilled professionals who migrate to rich countries often send remittances back to their home countries, which can significantly contribute to the economies of poor nations. 
        • Supporting idea: When these professionals eventually return to their home countries, they bring with them new skills, knowledge, and experiences gained abroad, which can positively impact their countries of origin. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "knowledge" tiếng anh
        • Example: 
          • Filipino nurses who work in the United States often send remittances back to their families in the Philippines. These remittances can help to pay for education, healthcare, and other necessities.
          • Mexican engineers who work in the United States often send remittances back to their families in Mexico. These remittances can help to invest in businesses and start-ups, which can create jobs and stimulate economic growth.
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