Phân tích "Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea:  technology has made our lives more convenient than ever before   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ "CONVENIENT" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: Smart home technologies minimise the number of routine activities performed by people such as controlling the air conditioner and checking for groceries at home
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: giving up modern technology would result in a much more complex society, and our lives will be difficult  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "convenience" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Modern technology has been integrated into nearly every field of our communities, taking control of many areas. 
        • If the Internet were abandoned in the business sector, many daily tasks could not be accomplished, such as international video conferencing or daily managerial tasks. 
        • Our recreational activities have become closely connected with such technology as well, such as online shopping, Internet banking service and video streaming service  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase "convenient" tiếng anh
        • These modern inventions are exactly what makes our lives so colourful
      • Example: When the internet and phone technology were not popular in the past, a person needed to send a letter if he wanted to communicate with a friend far away.  In fact, the whole process was complicated and it could take days until the sender received a response  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "comfortable" tiếng anh

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