Phân tích "The government now plans to establish some car-free zones in the center of the city. Some like this plan for they believe it can help eliminate traffic congestion, while others dislike it because not being able to reach places like stores and restaurants by car is very inconvenient to them. What do you think of this plan and why?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5)

· Đề thi IELTS thật,Task 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The government now plans to establish some car-free zones in the center of the city. Some like this plan for they believe it can help eliminate traffic congestion, while others dislike it because not being able to reach places like stores and restaurants by car is very inconvenient to them. What do you think of this plan and why?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

I. Đề bài

The government now plans to establish some car-free zones in the center of the city. Some like this plan for they believe it can help eliminate traffic congestion, while others dislike it because not being able to reach places like stores and restaurants by car is very inconvenient to them. What do you think of this plan and why?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
  • Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE”Car free zones should be implemented” có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE”Car free zones should be implemented”   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "implement" tiếng anh
      • Main idea: Places where there are no car free zones, cars often block the way when they are parking and exiting
        • Supporting idea:
          • Inconvenience caused by traffic creates frustration for citizens as they will not be able to arrive at their destinations on time
          • In streets with cars parked on both sides, pedestrians, bicycles and motor riders often have difficulties traveling  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng cụm "in the long run​/​term/in the short term
          • On many narrow streets, the pathway becomes even narrower when cars are packed, leaving little space to travel in between. 
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE”Car free zones should be implemented”
      • Main idea: Car free zones could lessen the cars in streets and encourage the public to use public transportation
        • Supporting idea:
          • The gaining popularity in private vehicles not only increases the rate of traffic jams, but also gives rise to serious air pollution  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CÁCH LẤY VÍ DỤ IELTS WRITING TASK 2
          • Large flows of cars in streets produce an enormous amount of carbon dioxide and other toxic gases to the air, which could cloud up the sky, degrade air quality and pose a potential threat to people’s well-being. 
          • A gradual shift from cars to public transportation could reduce the emission of greenhouse gas in cities in a long run. 
          • Setting up some car free zones incentivizes people to switch to a more environmentally friendly alternative transport means during their travel.
        • Example: 

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