Phân tích đề "Some cities have few controls over the design and construction of housing and office buildings"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh hướng dẫn em cách phân tích đề thi cùng đính kèm bài sửa bài viết của học sinh IELTS TUTOR đi thi hôm đấy và mới nhận kết quả thi 5.5 nhé, IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp Phân tích đề "Some cities have few controls over the design and construction of housing and office buildings"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

I. Đề bài

Some cities have few controls over the design and construction of housing and office buildings. People think that they should be free to choose the design they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng advantages outweigh disadvantages
  • Intro câu 2 & Conclusion: totally disagree với việc advantages outweigh disadvantages (= disadvantages outweigh advantages) 
  • Body 1: Lí do số 1 vì sao totally disagree (nên chọn ý liên quan đến design, nhớ đề cập cả housing & office) có  thể  triển  khai: 
    • Main idea: the lack of uniformity of houses (a unique feature in certain places). 
    • Supporting idea: tourist  attraction >> If the house owners in this city change the style and break this uniformity, the number of tourists visiting the area is likely to decrease.
    • Example: The houses in Hoi An, for instance, demonstrate a consistent style and therefore have made the city a popular tourist destination. 
  • Body 2: Lí do số 2 vì sao totally disagree (nên chọn ý liên quan đến construction, nhớ đề cập cả housing & office) có  thể  triển  khai: 
    • Main idea: It is necessary to ensure that the appearance of new buildings does not ruin the overall outlay of the area.

    • Supporting idea: Houses, apartments, hotels, offices and so on that are designed with bizarre exteriors should not be encouraged to rise as they may cause discomfort to locals and visitors >> Instead, it is highly recommended that, prior to construction, these buildings’ blueprints should be shown to professionals and locals for their ideas.

    • Example: In today’s metropolises, it is not uncommon to see skyscrapers dominating the sight of ancient buildings that represent cultural and historical features of the land.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Đề đã phân ra là design và construction thì mình nên chia body 1 design, body 2 về construction, mà ở mỗi body thì đừng quên housing và cả office building phải đọc cho kĩ từng thành tố đề cho

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