Phân tích"Some feel that schools should be mixed with both girls and boys attending while others feel the genders ought to be separated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some feel that schools should be mixed with both girls and boys attending while others feel the genders ought to be separated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2

I. Đề bài

Some feel that schools should be mixed with both girls and boys attending while others feel the genders ought to be separated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:

III. Phân tích

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  • Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
      • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others feel the genders ought to be separated
        • Main idea: single-sex schools consistently top examination league tables because it enables them to focus on their studies >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
          • Supporting idea: 
            • In a co-educational school, children often get distracted by students of the opposite gender   (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: many of the interactions between boys and girls after they reach puberty can be distracting)
            • Girls may get infatuated by boys or vice-versa, and such distractions can hurt their scores and overall academic performance.
          • Example: Personally, I went to a school for both boys and girls and found that I had to deal with many more distractions compared to friends who attended the local girls-only college
      • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some feel that schools should be mixed with both girls and boys attending & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
        • Main idea: Mixing both sexes at school helps to develop social skills and makes people less awkward around the opposite sex later in life  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Studying at a mixed school allows both genders to foster their social skills)>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
          • Supporting idea:
            • School is a place to develop not only academically, but socially as well   (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: since children have more opportunities to communicate and interact with people of the opposite sex at an early age, they will learn how to cooperate with each other)
            • Without the opportunity to integrate socially with another gender, there is a strong chance they will have difficulty communicating later, and this may promote a lifelong habit of centering their social interactions on rigid gender groups.
            • This is especially true for males, who often find it difficult to approach and talk to women socially if they don’t get used to it first in the classroom  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "approach" tiếng anh
          • Example: For example, the Sunday Times recently reported that men who did not have regular social contact with girls when they were growing up are 68% more likely to suffer from anxiety when in the company of females.
      • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
        • Main idea: Sending children to mixed schools can bridge the inequality gap
          • Supporting idea:
            • By going to mixed-gender schools, children of both genders will have equal opportunities to participate in all subjects.
            • Assignments are given based on need instead of preconceived societal notions and there will be no favoritism towards one gender. Therefore, gender equality can be enforced in the school environment.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "equal" tiếng anh
          • Example: For example, girls can learn and play sports and vice versa, boys can learn about arts.
      • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm main idea khác: 
        • Main idea: a mixed-gender school gives students chances to learn how to deal with disputes with the other gender, which will strengthen their problem-solving abilities in the future. 
        • Main idea: Enrolling in a mixed school can help students be equipped for the real world simply because mixed-gender schools can create a similar environment where children can interact with each other and become accustomed to all sexes. >> Tham khảo 【HƯỚNG DẪN TỪNG BƯỚC】CÁCH LÀM BÀI TẬP MẪU IELTS READING DẠNG FILL IN THE GAP
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Students will have the chance to interact with individuals from all gender identifications in the future. 
          • Understanding the similarities and differences that exist between each individual will make it easier to form future relationships. 
          • This will teach them how to communicate and behave later on in life.

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