Phân tích"Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 19/12/2022 & 11/1/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 19/12/2022)

• Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature
    • Main idea 1: An individual who is cruel turns to crime more easily than a kind person.  
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: For instance, a child bullying other boys or girls at school may turn into a violent criminal in the future.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn Cách dùng từ "bully" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: Bad characteristics such as laziness or selfishness could also breed future offenders, who seek to acquire easy money without working for it. 
      • Supporting idea: A number of youngsters choose to steal from others, instead of working hard to make an honest living. 
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: (Viết về social problems) There are many problems in society which might lead to an increase in the crime rate.  
      • Supporting idea: 
        •  Unemployment pushes people into resorting to crime  because they simply cannot find a job.  
        • Another reason is is the increasing gap between the rich and the poor  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn Diễn đạt "ăn hiếp, ức hiếp" tiếng anh (Paraphrase "bully")
      • Example:  
        • This explains why some undeveloped parts of the world, such as Rio De Janeiro in Brazil, witnessed an escalating rate of crime in recent years.
        • One good illustration of this is that the people who are in dire need are bound to steal for their livelihood.    >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Main idea 2: (Viết về poverty) Poverty could also be to blame for a rise in crime.
      • Supporting idea: If people do not have enough money to make ends meet, they will be tempted to pursue illegal activities just to support themselves and their families.
      • Example: 

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