Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 19/12/2022)
I. Đề bài
- Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
- Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature
- Main idea 1: An individual who is cruel turns to crime more easily than a kind person.
- Supporting idea:
- Example: For instance, a child bullying other boys or girls at school may turn into a violent criminal in the future. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "bully" tiếng anh
- Main idea 2: Bad characteristics such as laziness or selfishness could also breed future offenders, who seek to acquire easy money without working for it.
- Supporting idea: A number of youngsters choose to steal from others, instead of working hard to make an honest living.
- Example:
- Main idea 1: An individual who is cruel turns to crime more easily than a kind person.
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
- Main idea 1: (Viết về social problems) There are many problems in society which might lead to an increase in the crime rate.
- Supporting idea:
- Unemployment pushes people into resorting to crime because they simply cannot find a job.
- Another reason is is the increasing gap between the rich and the poor >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Diễn đạt "ăn hiếp, ức hiếp" tiếng anh (Paraphrase "bully")
- Example:
- This explains why some undeveloped parts of the world, such as Rio De Janeiro in Brazil, witnessed an escalating rate of crime in recent years.
- One good illustration of this is that the people who are in dire need are bound to steal for their livelihood. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: (Viết về poverty) Poverty could also be to blame for a rise in crime.
- Supporting idea: If people do not have enough money to make ends meet, they will be tempted to pursue illegal activities just to support themselves and their families.
- Example:
- Main idea 1: (Viết về social problems) There are many problems in society which might lead to an increase in the crime rate.
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature
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