Phân tích"Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 19/12/2022 & 11/1/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 19/12/2022)

• Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature
    • Main idea 1: An individual who is cruel turns to crime more easily than a kind person.  
      • Supporting idea: This is because cruelty often correlates with a lack of empathy, a disregard for others' well-being, and a propensity for aggressive behavior, all of which can lead to criminal activities.
      • Example: For instance, a child bullying other boys or girls at school may turn into a violent criminal in the future.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn Cách dùng từ "bully" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: Bad characteristics such as laziness or selfishness could also breed future offenders, who seek to acquire easy money without working for it. 
      • Supporting idea: A number of youngsters choose to steal from others, instead of working hard to make an honest living. 
      • Example: The surge in cybercrime, particularly among young people, exemplifies this issue as the allure of quick and easy money through online scams, hacking, or identity theft, along with the rise of online gambling and betting scams, tempts individuals seeking material wealth without the traditional work ethic. 

  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: (Viết về social problems) There are many problems in society which might lead to an increase in the crime rate.  
      • Supporting idea: 
        •  Unemployment pushes people into resorting to crime  because they simply cannot find a job.  
        • Another reason is is the increasing gap between the rich and the poor  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn Diễn đạt "ăn hiếp, ức hiếp" tiếng anh (Paraphrase "bully")
      • Example:  
        • This explains why some undeveloped parts of the world, such as Rio De Janeiro in Brazil, witnessed an escalating rate of crime in recent years.
        • One good illustration of this is that the people who are in dire need are bound to steal for their livelihood.    >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Main idea 2: (Viết về poverty) Poverty could also be to blame for a rise in crime.
      • Supporting idea: If people do not have enough money to make ends meet, they will be tempted to pursue illegal activities just to support themselves and their families.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The causes of crime have long been a topic of debate. While some argue that crime stems from a person's inherent nature, I do believe it is the result of social problems and poverty

On the one hand, advocates of the view that crime results from a person's nature suggest that individuals with cruel tendencies are more likely to engage in criminal activities. This is because cruelty often correlates with a lack of empathy, disregard for others' well-being, and aggressive behavior, all of which can lead to crime. For example, a child who bullies others at school may grow up to become a violent criminal. Additionally, bad characteristics such as laziness or selfishness can breed future offenders who seek easy money without working for it. Many young people, lured by the prospect of quick and easy money, turn to cybercrime, engaging in online scams, hacking, and identity theft.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, some, myself included, argue that crime is primarily a result of social problems and poverty, a perspective I support. Social issues, such as unemployment, can push people towards crime as they struggle to find legitimate employment. The widening gap between the rich and the poor exacerbates this issue, as seen in places like Rio De Janeiro, where high crime rates are prevalent in impoverished areas. Poverty is another significant factor; individuals struggling to make ends meet may resort to illegal activities to support themselves and their families. This explains why people in dire need often turn to theft or other crimes for survival.

In conclusion, while inherent personal traits can contribute to criminal behavior, social problems and poverty play a more significant role in driving people towards crime. Addressing these underlying issues is crucial for reducing crime rates.

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