Phân tích "Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 4/2/2023 & 11/7/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 4/2/2023)

Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm  Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports
    • Main idea 1: Dangerous sports can come with several risks to the participants.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: players may get seriously injured or even get killed HOẶC: such activities pose a significant risk to the health and safety of participants.)
      • Supporting idea: Players always face life-threatening perils once they decide to take part in extreme sports, especially those that involve highly specialized gears, namely skydiving, motor-racing, or mountain climbing. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn​ Paraphrase từ"participate/join"(Diễn đạt"tham gia"tiếng anh)
      • Example: 
        • For instance, extreme sports such as bungee jumping, skydiving, and mountain climbing require participants to engage in activities that put their lives at risk.
        • For example, participants in extreme sports such as base jumping may experience a rush of adrenaline, but the constant fear of falling from great heights can take a toll on their mental well-being.
    • Main idea 2: Many extreme sports such as boxing represent violence, so this will encourage aggressive thoughts and behaviours of viewers, especially young children
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Children may imitate the violent actions they have witnessed in extreme sports, leading to a cycle of aggressive behavior. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn​ Cách dùng danh từ"imitation"tiếng anh
        • The constant exposure to violence and aggression can cause children to experience fear and anxiety, which can result in long-term psychological harm.
      • Example: One example of the influence of extreme sports on behavior can be seen in the increased instances of bullying and aggressive behavior in school-aged children who have been exposed to such sports.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn​ Cách dùng danh từ "behavior" & "misbehavior"
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: One’s well-being is first and foremost within their individual liberties (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: such bans are an infringement on personal freedom and choice)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • People have their right to do whatever they wish
        • Banning a person from chasing their passion is unreasonable, especially when they have fully acknowledged the threats that come with it. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Individuals should be able to make their own decisions about the risks they are willing to take and should not be prevented from pursuing the activities they enjoy) >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn​ Cách dùng danh từ "individual" tiếng anh
        • Should a person want challenge himself for enjoyment, his option should be respected rather than forbidden by law
    • Main idea 2: The concern of the risk element becomes somewhat reduced because of the fact that those who participate in these activities have to undertake rigorous training and experience for long periods of time 
      • Supporting idea: This can ensure they are in peak physical and mental condition in order to take up these hazardous sports. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN BIỆT ASSURE, ENSURE & INSURE
      • Example: For instance, climbers like Alex Honnold have dedicated countless hours to honing their skills, understanding rock formations, and mastering advanced climbing techniques. This extensive preparation significantly reduces the risk associated with their sport, although danger is still inherent.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others believe that people should have the freedom to engage in any sports or activities. Both perspectives have their merits, but I agree with the latter view.

On one hand, those who believe that dangerous sports should be banned argue that such activities pose significant risks to participants' health and safety. Players in extreme sports like skydiving, motor racing, or mountain climbing face life-threatening dangers every time they participate. For instance, activities such as bungee jumping and base jumping require participants to engage in high-risk maneuvers that could result in severe injury or death. Moreover, many extreme sports, such as boxing, promote violence, potentially encouraging aggressive behaviors, especially in impressionable young children. Exposure to violent sports can lead to imitative behavior and increased instances of bullying and aggression among school-aged children, causing long-term psychological harm.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, proponents of allowing people the freedom to engage in any sports, myself included, argue that individual liberties should be respected. Banning dangerous sports is seen as an infringement on personal freedom and choice. People have the right to pursue their passions and make their own decisions about the risks they are willing to take. Preventing individuals from participating in activities they enjoy, especially when they are aware of the potential dangers, is considered unreasonable. Furthermore, participants in extreme sports often undergo rigorous training and acquire extensive experience, which significantly reduces the risks involved. For example, climbers like Alex Honnold spend years mastering climbing techniques and understanding rock formations, ensuring they are in peak physical and mental condition to tackle hazardous sports safely.

In conclusion, while there are valid concerns about the risks associated with dangerous sports, I am of the opinion that individuals should have the freedom to choose and pursue their passions, provided they are fully aware of the potential dangers involved.

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