Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people believe that students should study in groups. Others think that they should study alone. What are the benefits of studying in groups and studying alone? Which way is more effective?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people believe that students should study in groups. Others think that they should study alone. What are the benefits of studying in groups and studying alone? Which way is more effective?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng 2 questions
  • Câu hỏi 1: What are the benefits of studying in groups and studying alone?
  • Câu hỏi 2: Which way is more effective?
• Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 (trong đó chia 2 phần nửa đoạn là nói về benefits of studying in groups, nửa đoạn sau nói về studying alone)
  • Main idea 1: (nói về benefits of studying in groups) Studying in groups would create inspiration and a positive attitude towards learning.
    • Supporting idea: Boost motivation: Make attempt to learn to catch up with their peers. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "attempt" tiếng anh
    • Example: For example, when a student sees others actively participating and achieving good results, they may feel motivated to put in more effort to match or surpass their peers' performance. This competitive yet supportive atmosphere can lead to improved academic performance and a more positive attitude towards learning.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR  
  • Main idea 2: (nói về studying alone) Studying alone allows learners to study at their own convenience with little dependence on other people.
    • Supporting idea: The process of achieving knowledge is different from each individual in terms of learning style. 
    • Example: For instance, some students might be visual learners who prefer to use diagrams and charts to understand concepts, while others might be auditory learners who benefit more from listening to lectures or discussions. When studying alone, learners can tailor their study methods to their unique preferences without having to compromise for the learning styles of others.
• Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2: Studying alone is more effective. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase "effective" tiếng anh
  • Main idea 1: Enhance critical thinking to figure out answers to the problems on their own.
    • Supporting idea: 
      • More mature in their way of thinking.
      • This maturity allows them to analyze situations from different perspectives, evaluate the available evidence, and make informed decisions. As a result, they are better equipped to solve complex problems independently, without relying heavily on external guidance.
  • Main idea 2: Shape independent learning attitude. 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Higher concentration: No distraction from peers → necessary for reading books or preparation for exam >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic Concentration
      • Without the interruptions that often come with group study sessions, students can absorb information more effectively and retain it for longer periods. This heightened level of concentration not only improves their immediate learning outcomes but also fosters a self-reliant approach to their education, making them more adept at managing their own study schedules and learning processes in the long term.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Today, debates about the most suitable learning method often revolve around whether students should study collaboratively or independently. Although both approaches offer distinct advantages, I totally agree that studying alone is ultimately the more effective choice for long-term academic development.

In terms of benefits, studying in groups can generate strong learning synergy (sự hiệp lực – the combined power of a group), which inspires students to maintain a positive learning disposition (thái độ học tập tích cực – a learner’s mindset or attitude). Group interaction encourages learners to make greater attempts to keep up with their peers, thereby boosting overall motivation. For example, when one student observes others actively contributing and achieving high results, they are often driven to match or even surpass this performance, creating a competitive yet supportive environment. Conversely, studying alone provides learners with unrestricted autonomy (quyền tự chủ hoàn toàn – complete freedom to control one’s learning), allowing them to design their study pace and methods based on personal learning styles. For instance, visual learners may rely on diagrams, while auditory learners benefit from lectures; independent study enables them to tailor (điều chỉnh – modify to suit needs) these strategies without compromise.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Regarding which method is more effective, studying alone clearly yields superior outcomes. First, it enhances critical thinking because students must figure out solutions independently, which cultivates cognitive maturity (sự trưởng thành trong tư duy – advanced mental development). This maturity strengthens their ability to evaluate evidence, analyze situations from multiple angles, and make sound decisions. Second, independent study shapes a strong self-directed learning attitude. With fewer distractions and no peer-related interruptions, students can maintain heightened concentration (mức độ tập trung cao – deep and continuous focus), enabling better information retention and more efficient exam preparation.

In conclusion, while both study methods provide valuable benefits, independent study is undeniably more effective due to its role in developing critical thinking and long-term autonomy.

NEW VOCABULARY LIST (with synonyms, antonyms & examples)

1. synergy (sự hiệp lực – combined effort that produces a better result)

Synonyms: collaboration, cohesion, cooperation
Antonyms: isolation, separation, division
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: studying in groups can generate strong learning synergy.

2. positive learning disposition (thái độ học tập tích cực – positive mindset toward learning)

Synonyms: attitude, orientation, mindset
Antonyms: reluctance, resistance, indifference
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: inspires students to maintain a positive learning disposition.

3. unrestricted autonomy (quyền tự chủ hoàn toàn – full freedom to control learning)

Synonyms: self-direction, independence, freedom
Antonyms: dependence, constraint, control
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: studying alone provides learners with unrestricted autonomy.

4. tailor (điều chỉnh – adjust to suit needs)

Synonyms: adapt, modify, customize
Antonyms: standardize, generalize, rigidify
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: independent study enables them to tailor their strategies.

5. cognitive maturity (sự trưởng thành trong tư duy – advanced mental development)

Synonyms: intellectual growth, mental development, reasoning ability
Antonyms: immaturity, ignorance, naivety
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: which cultivates cognitive maturity.

6. heightened concentration (mức độ tập trung cao – deep and focused attention)

Synonyms: focus, attentiveness, alertness
Antonyms: distraction, inattentiveness, diversion
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: students can maintain heightened concentration.

DIFFICULT GRAMMAR STRUCTURES

1. Although both approaches offer distinct advantages, I totally agree that…

→ Mệnh đề nhượng bộ + mệnh đề chính
→ Mặc dù hai cách tiếp cận đều có lợi thế riêng, tôi hoàn toàn đồng ý rằng…

2. Group interaction encourages learners to make greater attempts to keep up with their peers

→ Cấu trúc “encourage + someone + to V”
→ Tương tác nhóm khuyến khích người học nỗ lực nhiều hơn…

3. When one student observes others…, they are often driven to…

→ Mệnh đề thời gian + mệnh đề chỉ kết quả
→ Khi một học sinh thấy người khác…, họ thường được thúc đẩy…

4. Studying alone clearly yields superior outcomes

→ Cấu trúc nhấn mạnh kết luận mạnh mẽ
→ Học một mình rõ ràng mang lại kết quả vượt trội.

5. With fewer distractions and no peer-related interruptions, students can maintain heightened concentration

→ Cấu trúc giới từ “With + N, S + V” để chỉ điều kiện
→ Với ít sự xao nhãng…, học sinh có thể duy trì sự tập trung cao.

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