Phân tích"Some people say that parents have the most significant influence in a child’s development. However, others say that things like television or friends have the most important influence on them. Discuss both views and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people say that parents have the most significant influence in a child’s development. However, others say that things like television or friends have the most important influence on them. Discuss both views and give your opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

I. Đề bài

Some people say that parents have the most significant influence in a child’s development. However, others say that things like television or friends have the most important influence on them. Discuss both views and give your opinion

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng TOPIC "ANIMAL" IELTS

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
  • Dạng disccss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm things like television or friends have the most important influence on them (there are factors external to the family that significantly impact on a child’s development)
      • Main idea 1: (Viết về TV) Children spend enormous amounts of time in front of the TV and get influenced by TV programmes
        • Supporting idea: 
          • News reports shown on television keep children updated with latest information around the world
          • Children also obtain inspiration by watching talent shows on TV
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: (Viết về friend) a child will often copy peers that they admire and respect. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • This could be positive behaviour, but it could also be negative such as smoking or taking drugs.
          • Friendship teaches them how to be supportive and now maintain trust
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm”parents have the most significant influence in a child’s development” & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này (it is family who have the most important impact)
      • Main idea 1: Children spend nearly all of their time with their family, especially in their early years. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • They develop their confidence, socialisation skills, morals, values and views on life through their interaction with them 
          • The atmosphere at home plays a crucial role in shaping their character and personality
        • Example: Those that grow up in a dysfunctional home often eventually have problems themselves whilst those that are brought up in a warm and close environment end up more confident and secure in adult life.
      • Main idea 2: a child learns family traditions and religious rituals by observing their elders
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: For example, during my childhood, I had always followed the footsteps of my parents and grand parents in numerous ways such as white putting on particular clothes according to occasions as well as respectfully treating my guests. 

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