Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi máy 11/3/2022)
I. Đề bài
Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
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- Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society.
- Main idea 1: Paying taxes gives financial funds to the authority for the growth of a country.
- Supporting idea: it’s used to develop infrastructures, like building streets, hospitals, schools, and public facilities including public phones, transportations, libraries, amusement parks…
- Example: In Sweden, the taxation system plays a pivotal role in funding public services, with citizens' tax contributions supporting significant projects, including the construction of high-quality roads, state-of-the-art healthcare facilities, modern schools, and an efficient public transportation network. This tangible investment in public infrastructure exemplifies how tax payments directly contribute to the nation's growth and development, enhancing the overall quality of life for its residents.
- Main idea 2: Taxes are used to cover salaries of civil servants who work for the authorities and the society >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic "society" tiếng anh (Collocation của "social")
- Supporting idea: Taxes play a vital role in covering the salaries of civil servants, ensuring the functioning of government institutions and the provision of essential services to society.
- Example: For instance, teachers, healthcare professionals, and administrative staff receive salaries funded by taxes, illustrating how these contributions directly sustain the individuals responsible for upholding and enhancing societal well-being.
- Main idea 1: Paying taxes gives financial funds to the authority for the growth of a country.
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này (Besides paying taxes, as a member of the society, a person has to be responsible towards other moral and legal duties)
- Main idea 1: (Viết về moral duties) The ethical liabilities include respecting the elders, loving, and helping those in need, in order to maintain peace and harmony in the nation.
- Supporting idea: keeping the surroundings clean, helping in development and being cautious about the crimes around ourselves is also the part of our duty >> IELTS TUTOR giải thích Crime, a crime hay Crimes và cách dùng trong tiếng anh
- Example: In Japan, the cultural emphasis on ethical responsibilities, exemplified by the concept of "Mottainai," encourages individuals to respect resources, elders, and nature. This commitment extends to community responsibility, evident in initiatives like neighborhood clean-up activities ("machi aruki"), showcasing how ethical duties contribute to maintaining a harmonious community and the overall well-being of society.
- Main idea 2: (Viết về legal duties) As the government has provided equal rights and law to each citizen, it is our role to obey these laws.
- Supporting idea: Adherence to laws and equal rights is essential for maintaining social order and ensuring justice within a society.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- Example: In Canada, where emphasis on equal rights and the rule of law prevails, citizens actively engage in upholding these principles. The Canadian Charter of Rights and Freedoms guarantees fundamental rights, and civic participation, including peaceful protests and legal advocacy, exemplifies how collective adherence to laws reinforces the principles of equality and justice, contributing to a just and orderly society.
- Main idea 1: (Viết về moral duties) The ethical liabilities include respecting the elders, loving, and helping those in need, in order to maintain peace and harmony in the nation.
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society.
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
Some people believe that paying taxes is a sufficient way to contribute to their country, while others argue that citizens have additional social obligations (duties that individuals have towards the well-being of their community – nghĩa vụ xã hội). I align with the latter view, as I believe that being a responsible citizen entails more than just fulfilling financial obligations.
While taxation certainly plays a crucial role in national development, I firmly believe that citizens' responsibilities extend well beyond financial contributions (monetary support provided to the government – sự đóng góp về tài chính).
On the one hand, it is undeniable that tax revenue provides governments with the financial backbone (the main source of monetary support – nền tảng tài chính) necessary to operate effectively. Tax funds are allocated for the construction and maintenance of public infrastructure (development and upkeep of facilities such as roads, hospitals, and schools – việc xây dựng và bảo trì cơ sở hạ tầng công cộng), which enhances the standard of living for the entire population. For example, Sweden’s state-of-the-art (very modern and using the most recent ideas and methods – hiện đại nhất) healthcare and education systems are a direct result of a robust taxation structure. Furthermore, taxes also sustain the salaries of public-sector workers (continue to provide financial support for civil servants like teachers and doctors – duy trì lương cho người làm việc công), whose roles are vital for the smooth functioning of society. Without taxation, these essential services would collapse (fail suddenly or completely – sụp đổ), leading to societal disorder and inefficiency.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
On the other hand, I support the view that individuals bear broader civic responsibilities (wider duties related to being a responsible member of society – trách nhiệm công dân rộng hơn), which cannot be fulfilled by merely paying taxes. Apart from legal compliance (following the laws and regulations – tuân thủ pháp luật), people must uphold moral values (principles concerning right and wrong – giá trị đạo đức) such as compassion, respect, and community engagement (active participation in activities that benefit society – sự tham gia vào cộng đồng). For instance, in Japan, citizens actively participate in voluntary activities like street cleaning, which fosters social harmony and a sense of collective accountability (shared responsibility among community members – trách nhiệm tập thể). Additionally, obeying laws and promoting equality, as seen in Canada, reflects a society where people respect not only authority but also one another. This legal and ethical consciousness is instrumental in building a cohesive, law-abiding society (a united and orderly society in which laws are respected – xã hội đoàn kết và tuân thủ pháp luật).
In conclusion, while taxes are vital for public welfare, active participation in ethical and legal duties is equally crucial for a well-rounded, functional society (a balanced and efficiently operating community – xã hội toàn diện và hiệu quả).
🧠 New Vocabulary with Explanations (English & Vietnamese)
social obligations: duties towards others in the community (nghĩa vụ xã hội)
financial contributions: monetary support given to help a cause or government (sự đóng góp về tài chính)
financial backbone: the main financial support system (nền tảng tài chính)
construction and maintenance of public infrastructure: building and upkeep of public facilities (xây dựng và bảo trì cơ sở hạ tầng công cộng)
state-of-the-art: extremely modern and advanced (hiện đại nhất)
sustain the salaries of public-sector workers: continue paying civil servants (duy trì lương cho người làm việc công)
collapse: fail completely (sụp đổ)
broader civic responsibilities: larger set of duties as citizens (trách nhiệm công dân rộng hơn)
legal compliance: obeying the law (tuân thủ pháp luật)
moral values: ethical principles (giá trị đạo đức)
community engagement: participation in community-benefiting actions (sự tham gia vào cộng đồng)
collective accountability: shared responsibility among individuals (trách nhiệm tập thể)
cohesive, law-abiding society: united, orderly society (xã hội đoàn kết và tuân thủ pháp luật)
well-rounded, functional society: balanced and effective society (xã hội toàn diện và hiệu quả)
🔁 Examples + Synonyms & Antonyms
1. social obligations
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...citizens have additional social obligations."
Synonyms: civic duties, public responsibilities, communal roles
Antonyms: self-interest, negligence, apathy
2. financial backbone
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "tax revenue provides governments with the financial backbone necessary..."
Synonyms: financial pillar, economic foundation, monetary base
Antonyms: financial burden, liability, instability
3. state-of-the-art
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Sweden’s state-of-the-art healthcare and education systems..."
Synonyms: cutting-edge, ultra-modern, up-to-date
Antonyms: outdated, obsolete, antiquated
🧩 Difficult Grammar Structures Used
"While taxation certainly plays a crucial role in national development, I firmly believe..."
→ While + clause, main clause (Mặc dù... nhưng...)
→ Vietnamese: Mặc dù việc đánh thuế đóng vai trò quan trọng trong sự phát triển quốc gia, tôi tin chắc rằng..."...which enhances the standard of living for the entire population."
→ Relative clause to add detail
→ Vietnamese: ... điều này nâng cao mức sống cho toàn bộ dân cư."...a society where people respect not only authority but also one another."
→ Not only... but also...
→ Vietnamese: ...một xã hội nơi người dân không chỉ tôn trọng chính quyền mà còn tôn trọng lẫn nhau."...which cannot be fulfilled by merely paying taxes."
→ Passive structure with modal verb
→ Vietnamese: ...mà không thể được hoàn thành chỉ bằng việc đóng thuế.
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