Phân tích"Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm ”children should begin their formal education at  a very early age”.
    • Main idea 1:  the younger an individual is, the easier it is for them to acquire new knowledge and information >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "knowledge" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • these children would have a head start over their peers pursuing higher education
        • scientific research has illustrated that language acquisition ability is greater at a younger age than at an older one; therefore, an increasing figure for parents would like their children to be exposed to foreign languages sooner >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng THEREFORE & HENCE trong tiếng anh
      • Example: 
        • A study by the Center for Applied Linguistics found that children who are exposed to multiple languages from a young age are better able to learn and retain new information.
        • A study by the University of Cambridge found that children who are bilingual are better able to multitask and switch between different tasks.
    • Main idea 2: attending schools earlier offers children opportunities to discover their talents or interests. 
      • Supporting idea: This means that they can build a stronger foundation in subjects they are good at or interested at an early age instead of waiting until age seven >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn DIỄN ĐẠT "GIỎI LÀM VIỆC GÌ" (good at sth) TIẾNG ANH
      • Example: A study by the Juilliard School found that young musicians who begin playing an instrument before the age of seven are more likely to become professional musicians.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm ”they should begin at at least 7 years old” & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1:  it might also be more beneficial for children to have a childhood in which they can cultivate their own skills and interests through normal activities at home >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng & ideas topic "CHILDHOOD" IELTS 
      • Supporting idea: Engaging in normal activities at home enables children to develop a wide range of skills, including cognitive, emotional, social, and physical aspects. These activities provide a holistic approach to learning and growth.
      • Example: 
        • My niece - Sarah, a seven-year-old girl, delights in the family kitchen, where she observes her mother's cooking and actively participates in simple tasks like measuring ingredients and stirring mixtures
        • Her parents nurture her curiosity, supplying a child-sized apron and a stool for safe engagement at the countertops, and encourage exploration by letting her taste diverse ingredients and learn about various cooking techniques.
    • Main idea 2: commencing school at a later age will offer kids more time to learn many things via their parents at home >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "kid" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: these children will become more mature and integrate more easily into the educational environment in the upcoming years >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & Word form của "integrate"
      • Example: A study by the Institute for Educational Studies found that homeschooled students are more likely to be involved in extracurricular activities and community service.

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