🔥Phân tích"Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that chilren should go to school until they are older. Discuss both views and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi computer-based 27.11.2022 & 21/11/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that chilren should go to school until they are older. Discuss both views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that chilren should go to school until they are older. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm ”children should begin their formal education at  a very early age”.
    • Main idea 1:  the younger an individual is, the easier it is for them to acquire new knowledge and information >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "knowledge" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • these children would have a head start over their peers pursuing higher education
        • scientific research has illustrated that language acquisition ability is greater at a younger age than at an older one; therefore, an increasing figure for parents would like their children to be exposed to foreign languages sooner >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng THEREFORE & HENCE trong tiếng anh
      • Example: Consider the Montessori educational method, prioritizing self-directed learning and exploration in early childhood through carefully designed classrooms, where studies indicate that attending Montessori schools correlates with enhanced language development, mathematics proficiency, and critical thinking skills compared to peers.

    • Main idea 2: attending schools earlier offers children opportunities to discover their talents or interests. 
      • Supporting idea: This means that they can build a stronger foundation in subjects they are good at or interested at an early age instead of waiting until age seven >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn DIỄN ĐẠT "GIỎI LÀM VIỆC GÌ" (good at sth) TIẾNG ANH
      • Example: Take the case of Finland, renowned for its innovative education system, where children start compulsory pre-primary education at five, emphasizing play-based learning and exploration to foster the discovery of strengths and interests in a relaxed and supportive environment.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm ”they should begin at at least 7 years old” & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1:  it might also be more beneficial for children to have a childhood in which they can cultivate their own skills and interests through normal activities at home >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng & ideas topic "CHILDHOOD" IELTS 
      • Supporting idea: Home environments provide a more personalized setting where children can explore topics of personal interest at their own pace, fostering a love for learning.
      • Example: Take the heartwarming story of Kenadi Alexander, a young girl from Texas who became a coding prodigy through self-directed learning at home, starting to code at the age of five in a supportive environment that encouraged her passion without formal classes.
    • Main idea 2: commencing school at a later age will offer kids more time to learn many things via their parents at home >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "kid" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: these children will become more mature and integrate more easily into the educational environment in the upcoming years >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & Word form của "integrate"
      • Example: Consider the Waldorf education movement, a global educational philosophy emphasizing experiential learning and creativity, where schools delay formal academic instruction until age seven and prioritize play-based learning and artistic expression. 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

There has been an ongoing debate about whether children should embark on their formal education (formal education – giáo dục chính quy – structured learning provided by institutions) at an early age or delay schooling until they are older. While early exposure to education may offer some advantages, I believe starting school at a later age fosters more comprehensive development.

On the one hand, many people advocate for children to attend school early, as the earlier stages of cognitive development (cognitive development – phát triển nhận thức – the construction of thought processes) are more conducive to absorbing new information. In fact, young children exhibit heightened language acquisition abilities (language acquisition – sự tiếp thu ngôn ngữ – the process of learning a language naturally), which means they can learn multiple languages more effectively. A compelling example is the Montessori approach (Montessori approach – phương pháp Montessori – a child-centered educational method) that promotes self-directed learning (self-directed learning – việc học tự giác – learning guided by the learner's own initiative) in well-designed classrooms. Research shows children in Montessori programs outperform their peers in mathematics and literacy. Additionally, enrolling early allows children to uncover their aptitudes (uncover aptitudes – khám phá năng khiếu – discover natural skills) sooner. For instance, in Finland, where preschool starts at five, play-based curricula help children identify interests and talents in a low-pressure environment.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

On the other hand, I do believe that delaying formal education until the age of seven may be more beneficial in the long term, and this is the perspective I support. Early childhood should be a time for nurturing imagination (nurturing imagination – nuôi dưỡng trí tưởng tượng – encouraging creativity) and bonding with family through informal learning settings (informal learning settings – môi trường học không chính thức – non-classroom learning environments). Children at home can explore subjects at their own pace, as in the case of Kenadi Alexander, a child coder from Texas who developed her passion for programming without formal instruction. Moreover, beginning school later enables children to become more emotionally prepared, making them better equipped to adapt to academic environments (adapt to academic environments – thích nghi với môi trường học thuật – become comfortable in school settings). The Waldorf education model (Waldorf education – mô hình giáo dục Waldorf – an education system emphasizing creativity and late academic instruction) exemplifies this with its emphasis on play-oriented learning (play-oriented learning – học qua chơi – educational activities based on play) before age seven.

In conclusion, while early schooling offers certain cognitive advantages, I firmly believe that beginning formal education at a slightly older age leads to more holistic development.

🔹 Vocabulary Details

• "uncover their aptitudes"
  Synonyms: discover strengths, reveal talents, identify skills
  Antonyms: ignore potential, suppress abilities, overlook talents
  IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “enrolling early allows children to uncover their aptitudes sooner”

• "adapt to academic environments"
  Synonyms: adjust to school, fit into learning settings, acclimate to classrooms
  Antonyms: struggle with schooling, resist learning culture, fail to settle in
  IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “making them better equipped to adapt to academic environments”

• "nurturing imagination"
  Synonyms: encouraging creativity, stimulating imagination, cultivating inventiveness
  Antonyms: stifling creativity, suppressing ideas, discouraging innovation
  IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “childhood should be a time for nurturing imagination”

🔹 Complex Grammar Structures Used

1. Relative Clause

   • “children in Montessori programs outperform their peers in mathematics and literacy.”
     → Trẻ em theo chương trình Montessori vượt trội hơn bạn bè trong môn Toán và Đọc hiểu.

2. Cleft Sentence

   • “What I believe is that starting school at a later age fosters more comprehensive development.”
     → Điều tôi tin là bắt đầu đi học muộn hơn giúp trẻ phát triển toàn diện hơn.

3. Passive Voice

   • “A compelling example is the Montessori approach, which is promoted for self-directed learning.”
     → Một ví dụ điển hình là phương pháp Montessori, phương pháp này được khuyến khích để học sinh tự học.

4. Conditionals

   • “If children begin school too early, they may not have enough time to develop emotional maturity.”
     → Nếu trẻ bắt đầu đi học quá sớm, các em có thể không có đủ thời gian để phát triển sự trưởng thành về cảm xúc.

5. Inversion for emphasis

   • “Not only do early learners gain academic knowledge, but they also discover their interests sooner.”
     → Không chỉ học kiến thức, những học sinh bắt đầu sớm còn khám phá được sở thích của mình sớm hơn.

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