Phân tích"Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward student who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward student who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward student who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm schools should reward students who show the best academic results
    • Main idea: The core of this argument is that this may encourage students to study hard for the best grade and that those who excel at academic performances should be praised for their efforts (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác:  their performance will also inspire other students to study harder and improve their grades HOẶC: This is one way of motivating the students and making them work hard to score their best in academic examinations)Cách dùng động từ"encourage"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:  
        • Exams are like a competition, and the winners deserve to be recognized.
        • If the school does not reward them, at least, some of them will lose the motivation and that may reflect in their gradesPhân biệt "Loss" "Lose" "Lost" và "Loose" trong tiếng anh
        • This not only encourages the student to work harder to keep with the consistency but may also encourage other students especially the ambitious students to get to that level so they will be rewarded too
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others believe that it is more important to reward student who show improvements & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea: Just knowing that the school appreciates their efforts will be a motivation for them and they will want to improve their performance by working harder  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác:  If students are rewarded for improving their academic scores, all the students will equally try to better themselves and may also help their peers out to improve their scores)Cách dùng từ "thank" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
        • When others recognize our efforts, we will want to work even harder and achieve greater results. 
        • If schools only reward academic toppers, others may assume that prizes are not meant for them, and in that case, they will give up even without making an effort to get better grades
      • Example:  
        • For example, when I was a child, I often received a small gifts from my parents once I scored higher than I did in the previous exam, and I still remember that this did make significant contributions to my study and helped me to progress fast in the classroom. Cách paraphrase động từ"receive"(Diễn đạt"nhận" tiếng anh)
        • For instance, teachers can pay a compliment as the recognition of the efforts that students make during the semester.

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