Phân tích"Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drinks that are scientifically proven to be bad for people's health. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drinks that are scientifically proven to be bad for people's health. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

I. Đề bài

Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drinks that are scientifically proven to be bad for people's health. Do you agree or disagree?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
  • Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
      • Main idea: Reduce health problems  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: to help improve people's diets)
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Regular overconsumption of food and drink high in calories, sugar and fat can lead to weight gain and, over time, obesity, which in turn has a significant impact on health and wellbeing and increases the risk of obesity related diseases   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic"Natural Resources"IELTS
          • To restrict the promotion of foods high in fat, sugar and salt 
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
      • Main idea: Force businesses not to produce unhealthy foods (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý có thể viết ý khác: not to market unhealthy food to consumers)
        • Supporting idea: 
          • The food industry plays a major role in the obesity epidemic
          • Responsible companies must commit to ending the flood of unhealthy food and support their customers to eat healthier by ensuring healthy choices are available, accessible and affordable for all.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng & Ideas topic "Throwaway society" IELTS
        • Example: 

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