Phân tích "Some people think traditional games are better than modern games in helping children develop their abilities. To what extent do you agree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Some people think traditional games are better than modern games in helping children develop their abilities. To what extent do you agree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Traditional games help to develop much needed skills for today’s children like communication, problem-solving and socialisation. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Traditional games are played mostly outdoors, and a lot of members are involved in it, so each member would get ample opportunity to interact with others closely. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: most of the traditional games were played outside with a lot of children, which nurtured their socialising skills, and almost all such games focused on the necessary skills of an individual needed for his survival)
        • Traditional games nurture the co-operation skills too in a child.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Traditional games help children to be a part of the nature and assist them to act responsibly in his surroundings >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "surroundings" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Themes or concepts of traditional games are mostly simple, and are closely related to the everyday social activities of people.
      • Example: For instance, there were a lot of traditional games which were related to agriculture and cultivation, which made children physically and mentally fit to take up related works in their future.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

It is often argued that modern games fail to cultivate diverse abilities in children, whereas traditional games play a more vital role in developing such skills. I totally agree with this statement because traditional activities help enhance children’s communication and problem-solving abilities, as well as encourage a stronger bond with nature and society.

To begin with, traditional games contribute significantly to children’s holistic development (n: overall and balanced growth – sự phát triển toàn diện). Most of these games are played outdoors and involve collective participation (n: group involvement – sự tham gia tập thể), which allows children to communicate and collaborate effectively with others. Through this interactive engagement (n: active two-way involvement – sự tương tác chủ động), youngsters learn how to solve conflicts, share responsibilities, and work as a team. Such hands-on experiences (n: practical real-life learning – kinh nghiệm thực tế) are often missing in today’s digital games, where players usually interact with screens rather than real people. For example, traditional games like “hide and seek” or “tag” nurture both cooperation and quick decision-making — essential skills for real-world communication.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Furthermore, traditional games strengthen children’s connection with their natural surroundings (n: the environment or setting – môi trường xung quanh) and foster a sense of responsibility toward their community. The themes (n: underlying subjects or ideas – chủ đề, ý tưởng chính) of these games are usually inspired by daily life and nature, such as agricultural activities or seasonal events, which promote environmental awareness (n: understanding of environmental issues – nhận thức về môi trường). For instance, many folk games related to farming not only kept children physically active but also mentally prepared them for future agricultural tasks, reflecting a culture-rooted upbringing (adj+n: an education based on cultural values – sự nuôi dưỡng gắn liền với văn hóa).

In conclusion, traditional games are far more effective than modern ones in nurturing children’s essential life skills and strengthening their relationship with both people and nature.

🔹 New Vocabulary & Definitions

1. Holistic development (n: overall and balanced growth – sự phát triển toàn diện)
   → IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Traditional games contribute significantly to children’s holistic development.”

2. Collective participation (n: group involvement – sự tham gia tập thể)
   → IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Most of these games are played outdoors and involve collective participation.”

3. Interactive engagement (n: active two-way involvement – sự tương tác chủ động)
   → IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Through this interactive engagement, youngsters learn how to solve conflicts.”

4. Hands-on experiences (n: practical real-life learning – kinh nghiệm thực tế)
   → IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Such hands-on experiences are often missing in today’s digital games.”

5. Natural surroundings (n: the environment or setting – môi trường xung quanh)
   → IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Traditional games strengthen children’s connection with their natural surroundings.”

6. Themes (n: underlying subjects or ideas – chủ đề, ý tưởng chính)
   → IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “The themes of these games are usually inspired by daily life and nature.”

7. Environmental awareness (n: understanding of environmental issues – nhận thức về môi trường)
   → IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “These games promote environmental awareness among children.”

8. Culture-rooted upbringing (adj+n: an education based on cultural values – sự nuôi dưỡng gắn liền với văn hóa)
   → IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “They reflect a culture-rooted upbringing.”

🔹 Difficult Grammar Structures

1. Cleft sentence for emphasis:
   It is often argued that modern games fail to cultivate diverse abilities in children, whereas traditional games play a more vital role...
   👉 Cấu trúc "It is ... that ..." dùng để nhấn mạnh quan điểm – Cấu trúc nhấn mạnh.
   → Nghĩa: Người ta thường cho rằng các trò chơi hiện đại không giúp trẻ phát triển nhiều kỹ năng, trong khi trò chơi truyền thống thì có vai trò quan trọng hơn.

2. Reduced relative clause:
   Most of these games are played outdoors and involve collective participation, which allows children to communicate...
   👉 Mệnh đề quan hệ được rút gọn, tránh lặp, giúp bài viết tự nhiên và học thuật hơn.
   → Nghĩa: Hầu hết các trò chơi này được chơi ngoài trời và có sự tham gia của tập thể, điều này giúp trẻ giao tiếp hiệu quả hơn.

3. Complex sentence with contrast clause:
   Such hands-on experiences are often missing in today’s digital games, where players usually interact with screens rather than real people.
   👉 Sử dụng mệnh đề tương phản để so sánh hai hiện tượng.
   → Nghĩa: Những trải nghiệm thực tế như vậy thường thiếu trong trò chơi kỹ thuật số hiện nay, nơi người chơi thường tương tác với màn hình thay vì con người thật.

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