Giải đề"Some people think that the best way to become successful in life is to get a university education, whereas others say this is no longer true. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Some people think that the best way to become successful in life is to get a university education, whereas others say this is no longer true. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm the best way to become successful in life is to get a university education
    • Main idea 1: University education is essential for those who want to achieve success in an academic career
      • Supporting idea: In some highly skilled professions, knowledge at academic institutions is a prerequisite
      • Example: It is not possible to achieve success as a doctor without a university degree  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Take the case of doctors, for instance, the continuous diagnosis and practice cannot compensate for years of rigorous training at a medical school)
    • Main idea 2: students can acquire qualities which are of paramount importance for their life success at universities>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting idea: by completing assignments and projects within a time budget, students can learn to plan and prioritize, which sharpens their time-management skills. 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others say this is no longer true & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: individuals cannot succeed with academic qualifications alone
      • Supporting idea: 
        • People need to sharpen their skill sets in the real working environment.
        • As theories from textbooks are generally outdated, one needs to expose themselves to various real-life situations at the workplace; otherwise, they will fail to meet their job requirements. 
      • Example: some talented individuals still manage to achieve success without any degrees. In the case of Bill Gates, a successful billionaire who quitted his program at Harvard, a prestigious university, it is his passion and diligence which drove him to the fame and fortune he deserves.
    • Main idea 2:  Entrepreneurial qualities, including risk-taking, creativity, and the ability to identify opportunities, are often honed through practical experience and not necessarily taught in academic settings.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Entrepreneurship involves taking calculated risks, which are best learned through real-world experiences where individuals must make decisions with tangible consequences. 
        • Academic environments may not adequately replicate the complexities of risk-taking in business ventures.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In today’s knowledge-driven (adj: based on the use of knowledge and information – dựa trên tri thức) world, opinions are divided on whether obtaining tertiary education (n: gaining education at a university or college level – học đại học hoặc cao đẳng) is the key to success or whether real-world experience holds more value. While university degrees can open doors to numerous career opportunities, I firmly believe that practical experience and soft skills play a more decisive role in determining one’s success.

On the one hand, higher education is considered an indispensable stepping stone (n: an essential stage that helps someone progress – bước đệm không thể thiếu) for those aiming to succeed in certain specialized fields. For example, pursuing (v: to engage in an activity or course of study – theo đuổi) a career in medicine or law requires years of rigorous academic training, as professional expertise cannot be gained through experience alone. Take the case of doctors, for instance, where continuous diagnosis and practice cannot compensate for years of intensive coursework (n: demanding academic study – chương trình học nặng) at medical school. Additionally, university life equips students with essential transferable skills (n: abilities that can be applied to different situations – kỹ năng có thể áp dụng linh hoạt) such as teamwork, critical thinking, and time management. Through completing projects and meeting deadlines, students learn to prioritize tasks and develop discipline—qualities that are of paramount importance (adj phrase: extremely important – vô cùng quan trọng) for achieving long-term success.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, I side with those who argue that academic qualifications alone are insufficient in today’s fast-evolving (adj: changing or developing rapidly – thay đổi nhanh chóng) job market. Knowledge acquired from textbooks often becomes outdated, and real success depends on how individuals adapt and innovate in practical contexts. Many self-made entrepreneurs have proven that a university degree is not a guaranteed pathway (n: a sure or certain route – con đường đảm bảo) to success. Bill Gates, for instance, dropped out of Harvard but still reached global recognition thanks to his creativity, resilience, and sharp business acumen. Furthermore, entrepreneurial flair (n: natural ability for business – năng khiếu kinh doanh), including risk-taking, decision-making, and opportunity recognition, is better cultivated through real-world challenges than in lecture halls. The academic environment, with its theoretical nature, often fails to simulate the unpredictability and high-stakes (adj: involving serious risks – có tính rủi ro cao) conditions found in real business ventures.

In conclusion, while university education undoubtedly lays a solid foundation for some professions, practical experience and adaptability remain the ultimate determinants of genuine success in life.

🔹 New Vocabulary List

1. knowledge-driven (adj: based on knowledge and information – dựa trên tri thức)
   Synonyms: information-based, learning-oriented, intellect-centered
   Antonyms: ignorance-based, uneducated, uninformed
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: In today’s knowledge-driven world, opinions are divided...

2. obtaining tertiary education (n: gaining education at a university or college level – học đại học hoặc cao đẳng)
   Synonyms: pursuing higher education, earning a degree, attending university
   Antonyms: dropping out, leaving school early, avoiding formal education
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Opinions are divided on whether obtaining tertiary education is the key to success...

3. indispensable stepping stone (n: an essential stage that helps someone progress – bước đệm không thể thiếu)
   Synonyms: essential foundation, vital stage, crucial milestone
   Antonyms: unnecessary step, obstacle, barrier
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Higher education is considered an indispensable stepping stone for those aiming to succeed...

4. transferable skills (n: abilities that can be applied to different situations – kỹ năng có thể áp dụng linh hoạt)
   Synonyms: portable skills, adaptable skills, versatile abilities
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   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: University life equips students with essential transferable skills such as teamwork...

5. fast-evolving (adj: changing or developing rapidly – thay đổi nhanh chóng)
   Synonyms: rapidly developing, swiftly changing, dynamic
   Antonyms: static, unchanging, slow-moving
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Academic qualifications alone are insufficient in today’s fast-evolving job market...

6. guaranteed pathway (n: a sure or certain route – con đường đảm bảo)
   Synonyms: secure route, assured track, definite course
   Antonyms: uncertain route, risky path, unpredictable journey
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: A university degree is not a guaranteed pathway to success.

7. entrepreneurial flair (n: natural ability for business – năng khiếu kinh doanh)
   Synonyms: business talent, commercial instinct, innovative ability
   Antonyms: business incompetence, lack of initiative, passivity
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Entrepreneurial flair, including risk-taking and decision-making, is better cultivated through real-world challenges.

8. high-stakes (adj: involving serious risks – có tính rủi ro cao)
   Synonyms: risky, precarious, uncertain
   Antonyms: safe, secure, low-risk
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Academic environments fail to simulate the high-stakes conditions found in real business ventures.

🔹 Difficult Grammar Structures

1. “While university degrees can open doors to numerous career opportunities, I firmly believe that…”
   → Complex sentence using concessive clause (“while” + contrast)
   → Translation: Mặc dù bằng đại học có thể mở ra nhiều cơ hội nghề nghiệp, tôi tin chắc rằng...

2. “Take the case of doctors, for instance, where continuous diagnosis and practice cannot compensate for years of intensive coursework.”
   → Relative clause + modal “cannot” expressing impossibility
   → Translation: Lấy ví dụ trường hợp bác sĩ, nơi việc thực hành liên tục không thể thay thế cho nhiều năm học tập chuyên sâu.

3. “Knowledge acquired from textbooks often becomes outdated, and real success depends on how individuals adapt and innovate.”
   → Parallel structure with coordinating conjunction “and”
   → Translation: Kiến thức thu được từ sách giáo khoa thường lỗi thời, và thành công thực sự phụ thuộc vào khả năng thích nghi và đổi mới của mỗi người.

4. “The academic environment, with its theoretical nature, often fails to simulate the unpredictability and high-stakes conditions found in real business ventures.”
   → Complex sentence using appositive phrase (“with its theoretical nature”)
   → Translation: Môi trường học thuật, với bản chất lý thuyết của nó, thường không thể mô phỏng sự khó lường và rủi ro cao trong các dự án kinh doanh thực tế.

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