Phân tích"Some say that parents whose children are breaking the law must be punished in some way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi giấy 21/4/2022&2/8/2025)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some say that parents whose children are breaking the law must be punished in some way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi giấy 21/4/2022)

Some say that parents whose children are breaking the law must be punished in some way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE 
    • Main idea: an ideal upbringing of a child is the duty of a parent  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: After bringing a baby into this world, parents have the responsibility to mould them into law-abiding citizens HOẶC: parents play the pivotal role in molding the psyche of young children)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This can only be achieved by equipping minors with moral values, enabling them to know what can be done or what should not be done   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  TỪ VỰNG & IDEAS TOPIC CRIME IELTS
        • if a child is unruly or ill-mannered, commonly the parents are thought of as not being able to discipline the child
        • The root cause of their problem is that they do not receive sufficient moral education from their parents, and consequently they cannot distinguish the right from wrong  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: As a minor, they do not have the ability to learn moral values by themselves)
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE 
    • Main idea:  if these irresponsible adults do not receive punishment which can effectively force them to fulfill their parental responsibility, their children will continue committing crimes (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: These juveniles are more likely to commit crimes in future, so it is necessary to penalize these adults to avoid these problems.)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Crime, a crime hay Crimes và cách dùng trong tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Repeat offending may harm innocent people and pose a threat to social security
        • Studies have shown that most young children who commit crimes have been abused in some way by their parents  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase từ CRIME tiếng anh
      • Example: 
        • Serial killers are an extreme but useful case in point. Nearly every serial killer begins antisocial behaviour from a young age, including the criminal torture of animals. 
        • There are also no known examples of serial killers coming from happy homes; they are all the product of varying degrees of abuse from their parents.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng & Word form của "crime"

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

It is often argued that parents should be held accountable when their children engage in unlawful behaviour. I totally agree with this notion, as parenting plays a decisive role in shaping a child’s moral compass, and punishing negligent caregivers may help curb juvenile delinquency.

To begin with, raising a child to become a responsible, law-abiding citizen is the non-negotiable obligation (non-negotiable obligation – EN: an unquestionable duty; VN: nghĩa vụ không thể chối bỏ) of every parent. After bringing a baby into this world, adults must act as behavioural role models (behavioural role models – EN: examples of how to behave properly; VN: tấm gương hành vi) and instil core values in their offspring. Children, being highly impressionable (impressionable – EN: easily influenced; VN: dễ bị ảnh hưởng), mimic their caregivers and internalise what they observe at home. Therefore, when a minor commits a crime, it is often a byproduct (byproduct – EN: unintended result; VN: hệ quả phát sinh) of poor parenting. For instance, many delinquent youths report having grown up in morally bankrupt households (morally bankrupt households – EN: families lacking ethical values; VN: gia đình suy đồi đạo đức), where violence or indifference is the norm.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Furthermore, penalising irresponsible parents can act as a deterrent mechanism (deterrent mechanism – EN: a method to prevent something; VN: cơ chế răn đe) to reduce repeated offending among juveniles. If adults understand that failure to fulfil their parenting duties may result in legal consequences, they are more likely to actively guide their children’s development. This approach is not only preventive (preventive – EN: designed to stop something from happening; VN: phòng ngừa) but also promotes social cohesion (social cohesion – EN: unity in society; VN: sự gắn kết xã hội). A case in point is that many serial offenders, including violent criminals, have been found to suffer from childhood abuse, trauma, or neglect, suggesting a direct correlation (direct correlation – EN: clear connection; VN: mối liên hệ trực tiếp) between failed parenting and criminal tendencies.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that punishing parents of young offenders is essential, as it reinforces their duty to raise morally conscious individuals and prevents societal harm.

New Vocabulary with Definitions & Examples

1. non-negotiable obligation – EN: an unquestionable duty; VN: nghĩa vụ không thể chối bỏ
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Raising a child to become a responsible citizen is the non-negotiable obligation of every parent.

2. behavioural role models – EN: examples of how to behave properly; VN: tấm gương hành vi
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Adults must act as behavioural role models and instil core values in their offspring.

3. impressionable – EN: easily influenced; VN: dễ bị ảnh hưởng
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Children, being highly impressionable, mimic their caregivers.

4. byproduct – EN: unintended result; VN: hệ quả phát sinh
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Juvenile crime is often a byproduct of poor parenting.

5. morally bankrupt households – EN: families lacking ethical values; VN: gia đình suy đồi đạo đức
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Many youths grew up in morally bankrupt households.

6. deterrent mechanism – EN: a method to prevent something; VN: cơ chế răn đe
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Penalising parents acts as a deterrent mechanism against future crimes.

7. parenting duties – EN: responsibilities related to raising children; VN: nghĩa vụ làm cha mẹ
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Adults must fulfil their parenting duties or face legal consequences.

8. preventive – EN: designed to stop something from happening; VN: phòng ngừa
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: This approach is not only preventive but also promotes unity.

9. social cohesion – EN: unity in society; VN: sự gắn kết xã hội
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Punishing parents helps maintain social cohesion.

10. direct correlation – EN: clear connection; VN: mối liên hệ trực tiếp
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: There is a direct correlation between failed parenting and criminal behaviour.

Synonyms & Antonyms (for “non-negotiable obligation”)

• Synonyms: unavoidable responsibility, unquestionable duty, absolute requirement

• Antonyms: optional task, voluntary role, discretionary choice

Grammar Structures Used & Vietnamese Translations

1. It is often argued that... – Cấu trúc bị động để thể hiện quan điểm chung
   → Nhiều người cho rằng...

2. After bringing a baby into this world, adults must act as... – Mệnh đề thời gian kết hợp với động từ khuyết thiếu "must" để diễn đạt nghĩa vụ
   → Sau khi sinh con, người lớn phải đóng vai trò như...

3. Children, being highly impressionable, mimic their caregivers... – Dạng rút gọn mệnh đề quan hệ
   → Trẻ em, vốn rất dễ bị ảnh hưởng, thường bắt chước người chăm sóc chúng...

4. If adults understand that failure to fulfil their parenting duties may result in legal consequences, they are more likely to... – Câu điều kiện loại 1
   → Nếu người lớn hiểu rằng không thực hiện nghĩa vụ có thể dẫn đến hậu quả pháp lý, họ sẽ có xu hướng...

5. A case in point is that many serial offenders... – Cấu trúc đưa ví dụ
   → Một ví dụ điển hình là nhiều tội phạm hàng loạt...

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