Phân tích & sửa bài map"The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam" IELTS WRITING

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Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích & sửa bài map"The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam" IELTS WRITING

I. Đề bài

The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.

The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Overall: From the maps, it is clear that the most noticeable change that occurred in the town was that of a huge lake. Additionally, the forest and farmlands had completely disappeared by 2010.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "change" tiếng anh
  • Body 1: viết map 1: mô tả theo bố cục từ khái quát đến chi tiết, từ phải qua trái 
    • Mountains also surrounded the houses and farmlands in the north and the south.
    • The river which flowed from north to south also ran through the middle of the town
    • On the southwest of the river bank were rare plants and animals - they were surrounded by ancient structures in the north and a mountain range in the south.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng & Word form của "surround"
    • The northwest of the riverbank also contained a forest.
  • Body 2: viết map 2 cũng mô tả theo đúng bố cục đã mô tả ở body 1 
    • While the mountains still existed, the villages in the far east were relocated further south of the mountains, and a large hotel was built in their place. 
    • A hydroelectric power dam was constructed with a wide range of electricity pylons appearing nearby.
    • Other than the villages houses, all establishments near the river was replaced by power lines transferring electricity 

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