Phân tích & Sửa đề"Women are able to join armed Force. Men should go to army, navy and air force"IELTS WRITING

Bên cạnh phân tích kĩ càng đề thi IELTS GENERAL TASK 2 ngày 4/8/2020, kèm bài sửa cho hs đi thi thật, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích & Sửa đề"Women are able to join armed Force. Men should go to army, navy and air force"IELTS WRITING

Women are able to join armed Force. Men should go to army, navy and air force.

Do you agree or disagree? (Hoặc đề khác: Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?)

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Ở đây đề muốn hỏi thí sinh về việc women are able to join armed force 
• Nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể phân bố 2 đoạn thân bài như sau:
  • Body 1: lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE  với ý kiến đề cho 
    • Main idea: women are fully capable of performing well in the military   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "capable" tiếng anh 
    • Supporting idea: Compared to men, women are more resourceful, thoughtful and meticulous. Those inborn qualities make them qualified for military logistics such as medical and health service support.
    • Example:  there were a host of valiant women soldiers whose achievements really put their male counterparts to shame such as….(hoặc History has shown that throughout human history, women have made notable contributions to the victory of those in the frontlines)>> their determination, courage and dignity, to this day, are still being admired by male soldiers and civilians alike throughout the world   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "maneuver / manoeuvre" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE  với ý kiến đề cho 
    • Main idea: modern warfare majorly depends on advanced technology rather than muscular strength as it was previously  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "admission" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: there would be trivial disparity between female solders and their male-counterparts in battle fields as both of them are able to control war machines.
    • Example: 

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