Phân tích & Sửa đề"The diagram shows the development of a particular area between 1965 to the present day"IELTS WRITING

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Bên cạnh phân tích kĩ càng đề thi IELTS GENERAL TASK 2 ngày 4/8/2020, kèm bài sửa cho hs đi thi thật, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích & Sửa đề"The diagram shows the development of a particular area between 1965 to the present day"IELTS WRITING

I. Đề bài

The diagram shows the development of a particular area between 1965 to the present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the development of a particular area between 1965 to the present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Nếu chia mỗi map 1 biểu đồ thì có thể phân bố bố cục như sau:
    • Overall: 
      • Dramatic urbanization has been taking place in the area, and the most notable change taking place in the area is the construction of a road bridge, which replaces the ferry  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "Replace" trong tiếng anh
      • Future addition of new transport facilities will even further transform the place in 2018 
    • Body 1: năm 1965
      • The eastern and western parts of the region were separated by a river, and were only connected by the ferry  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "attach" tiếng anh
      • To the south of the ferry (hoăc on the other side of the river), houses were built 
      • On the northern side of the ferry, there are forest on the left riverside
    • Body 2: now 
      • The access to entire area has now been substantially improved via a road bridge which is directly connected to the city  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "improve" tiếng anh
      • SOUTH 
        • To the south of the bridge, more houses were also built along the main road. 
        • There are several changes which are expected to take place by 2018, including a foot bridge which runs parallel to the main road, a yatch marina and a small car park.
      • NORTH 
        • There is a small car park which was built on the eastern side of the river, and this car park can be accessed from the main road via a small path.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt "access" dùng như danh từ & động từ
        • On the northern side of the road bridge, the forest on the left riverside has been cleared to make way for a large new car park. 

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