Giải đề"The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010" IELTS WRITING TASK 1.

The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Overall:
  • Germany and Norway witnessed an upward trend in the use of renewable energy sources in the three examined years >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "trend" tiếng anh
  • Among the four countries, this type of energy was most popular in Norway.
• Body 1: Viết về Norway & Iceland
  • Norway:
    • In 2000, almost half of the total energy produced in Norway came from renewable resources. This figure continued to climb steadily to 60% in 2004 and more than 750% in 2007. 
  • Iceland:
    • The figure for Iceland enjoyed an upward trend from 52% to nearly 60% between 2000 and 2004 before dropping to around 55% three years later >> IELTS TUtOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "figure" 
• Body 2: Viết về 2 nước còn lại 
  • Australia
    
  • Germany 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The bar chart illustrates the proportion (tỉ lệ - the percentage or part of a whole) of renewable energy (năng lượng tái tạo - energy from natural sources that is constantly replenished) in the total supply across four countries—Australia, Germany, Norway, and Iceland—between 2000 and 2007.

Overall, Norway consistently had the highest share (tỉ trọng cao nhất - the largest portion) of renewable energy, while Germany and Australia reported significantly lower levels (mức độ thấp đáng kể - much smaller values). An upward trajectory (xu hướng tăng lên - a gradual rise) was observed in most countries, with the exception of Iceland in the final year.

Norway started at nearly 50% in 2000, rising steadily to over 75% by 2007, indicating a strong reliance (sự phụ thuộc lớn - heavy dependence) on eco-friendly sources. Similarly, Iceland’s use increased initially but dipped slightly in 2007. Meanwhile, Germany’s figures climbed gradually (tăng từ từ - increased slowly), whereas Australia showed minimal change (ít thay đổi - very little variation) over the period.

🔁 Synonyms & Antonyms

1. Proportion

   • Synonyms: percentage, fraction, ratio

   • Antonyms: whole, total, mass

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The proportion of renewable energy...

2. Upward trajectory

   • Synonyms: increase, rise, growth

   • Antonyms: decline, drop, fall

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: An upward trajectory was observed...

3. Minimal change

   • Synonyms: slight variation, negligible difference, insignificant shift

   • Antonyms: major shift, dramatic change, drastic difference

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Australia showed minimal change...

📚 Difficult Grammar Structures

1. “...with the exception of Iceland in the final year”

   • → Grammar Point: Prepositional phrase used to introduce contrast or exception

   • → Vietnamese: “ngoại trừ Iceland trong năm cuối cùng”

2. “...Norway started at nearly 50% in 2000, rising steadily to over 75% by 2007”

   • → Grammar Point: Present participle phrase used to show result or development

   • → Vietnamese: “bắt đầu từ gần 50% vào năm 2000, tăng đều đặn lên hơn 75% vào năm 2007”

3. “...while Germany and Australia reported significantly lower levels”

   • → Grammar Point: While-clause for contrast

   • → Vietnamese: “trong khi Đức và Úc báo cáo mức thấp hơn đáng kể”

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