Phân tích "The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops" IELTS WRITING TASK 1

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The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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  • Overall: There are 11 stages in the coffee manufacturing process, beginning with the collection of coffee beans and ending at the packing stage. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "collection" tiếng anh
  • Body 1:
    • Coffee beans are picked by hand before being dried in the sun. 
    • The dried beans are then roasted, cooled quickly and put in a grinder where they become ground coffee. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The post roasted beans are immediately cooled before they are ground) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng trạng từ "quickly" tiếng anh
    • The ground coffee is mixed with hot water, and this mixture is then strained and frozen, ready for the next step. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The powder thus obtained is mixed thoroughly in hot water) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "mixture" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: 
    • The grinder is used once again to grind the frozen liquid, which is then dried in a vacuum. 
    • At this point, the high temperature in the vacuum causes the water to evaporate, leaving only the ground coffee, which is put into different coffee containers. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "evaporate" 
    • These coffee jars are delivered to shops and supermarkets, ready to be sold to consumers. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The coffee powder thus obtained is packed in air-tight jars, labeled and sent for distribution) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "thus" tiếng anh

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